Evelyn the seagull

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Wild Birds Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton. 11/11/2023

Oh... I'm Evelyn the seagull eating rubbish, squawking down the sea. Oh... I'm invisible and a detested bird flying around. Not admired by anyone, but privileged I feel flying next to the ocean I love. Oh....unforgettable mornings with my "mews", my lovely or hated music to be listened to. Up and down, just flying above sometimes, but miserable when you push me down. Oh... I'm a hated bird all the time. I'm just feel loved when you meet me next to the coast. Oh.... then I know what it means to be loved. The only time you say: "I'm happy to see the seagulls because we are home". Then, I feel that I was born for a reason.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/15/2023 11:41:00 AM

Hello Maria, these birds are loved and hated. I do not like these birds. When on picnic they are there to take your food. Hugs. your friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/17/2023 9:47:00 AM

Hello Maria, I love the Dove, Red and Blue Jays, Sparrows Robins and the Geese. These are my fav. birds. Yes I know you are passionate about the sea. I feel that way with a Bay, River, Lake, Ocxean. and Sea. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darelene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/15/2023 11:54:00 AM

Hello my friend. You are right, they are loved and hated. They take whatever they can from you, that's true. But you know...I respect everyone's opinion. I really love them. There is always a reason. As you know, I'm passionate with the sea, and actually I live inland. Everytime I travel to the sea they remind me my life there. Have a nice afternoon Darlenexxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/11/2023 1:43:00 AM

Agreed, I love seagulls as they hover near the rocks and sea. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/11/2023 1:50:00 AM

Good morning Victor. I love them too. Thank you for stopping and leave your comment. Have a great weekendxxx

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/10/2023 7:32:00 PM

so touching poetry, beautifully written, preicous poem to be shared again yann

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/11/2023 1:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Yann. Have a lovely weekend my friendxxx