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Wild Birds Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton. 11/11/2023

Evelyn the seagull

Oh... I'm Evelyn the seagull
eating rubbish, squawking down the sea.
Oh... I'm invisible and a detested bird flying around.
Not admired by anyone, but privileged I feel flying next to the ocean I love.

Oh....unforgettable mornings with my "mews",
my lovely or hated music to be listened to.
Up and down, just flying above sometimes, 
but miserable when you push me down.

Oh... I'm a hated bird all the time. 
I'm just feel loved when you meet me next to the coast.
Oh.... then I know what it means to be loved. 
The only time you say:  "I'm happy to see the seagulls because we are home". Then, I feel that I was born
for a reason.
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Date: 11/15/2023 11:41:00 AM
Hello Maria, these birds are loved and hated. I do not like these birds. When on picnic they are there to take your food. Hugs. your friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/17/2023 9:47:00 AM
Hello Maria, I love the Dove, Red and Blue Jays, Sparrows Robins and the Geese. These are my fav. birds. Yes I know you are passionate about the sea. I feel that way with a Bay, River, Lake, Ocxean. and Sea. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darelene/
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/15/2023 11:54:00 AM
Hello my friend. You are right, they are loved and hated. They take whatever they can from you, that's true. But you know...I respect everyone's opinion. I really love them. There is always a reason. As you know, I'm passionate with the sea, and actually I live inland. Everytime I travel to the sea they remind me my life there. Have a nice afternoon Darlenexxx
Date: 11/11/2023 1:43:00 AM
Agreed, I love seagulls as they hover near the rocks and sea. Blessings.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/11/2023 1:50:00 AM
Good morning Victor. I love them too. Thank you for stopping and leave your comment. Have a great weekendxxx
Date: 11/10/2023 7:32:00 PM
so touching poetry, beautifully written, preicous poem to be shared again yann
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/11/2023 1:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Yann. Have a lovely weekend my friendxxx
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