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Where did you go Where are you now Unreachable unattainable Disappeared disenchanted Vanquished vanished Gone like the wind A past stirred up Of hurts and bruises Your gaping silence Unexplained unforgiving Burning wind persisting Through brush fire Time separating us Pungent scent of ashes Over its expanding gap Irreversible irretrievable AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 31, 2020 for contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 9/2/2020 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a write and picture. A full story in few words. Have a wonderful day with your win.........
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2020 2:12:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Much appreciated ~
Date: 9/1/2020 5:44:00 PM
Clever word choices and unique patterning make this a most interesting verse. Congrats Line on your fine placement.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2020 4:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Greg. Much appreciated ~
Date: 9/1/2020 4:52:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Line. Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2020 4:03:00 AM
Thanks, Janice. Much appreciated.

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