Mitch White Poet Rhyme

Euphoria

At sunrise, whispering winds start to die
Tranquility, lends itself to foment
Fragrance of wild lavender, drifts by
The loons circle a large effervescent

Diving for prey, I observe their splendor
I take aim and cast with all eloquence
Hopeful serendipity is in store
My vessel wafting, absolute silence

Dulcet hits, amounts to a tug of war
Reeling, I break into a lilting *bliss

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2010 at 2:18 AM Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Mitch. Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2010 at 9:07 PM Congratulations on being in the winners circle in Andrea's first contest. Blessings, Connie

April 18, 2010 at 10:17 AM Nice use of imagery for a peaceful feeling poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 18, 2010 at 8:08 AM Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and use of her beautiful words...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Joyce Johnson April 18, 2010 at 7:42 AM Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2010 at 1:21 AM Hey, I just knew it had to be a guy who wrote this one.haha. And I am so glad I got you in my top ten, Mitch. It is really weird to do the contest and then see at the very end whose poems you have chosen. Congratulations. YOu did great with the words. LUv, Andrea

James Marshall Goff April 17, 2010 at 6:08 AM perfection! Mitch! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 16, 2010 at 7:15 PM Perhaps I'll be in Euphoria after I see it!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 16, 2010 at 7:15 PM Am going to check out the "flower" Mitch and thankxxx for your special comments on my two wins too... high school? I'll never tell... haha.. going to find my "flower"..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Audrey Haick April 16, 2010 at 9:21 AM This is a beauty! You really work these words, Mitch.Great job! A winner for sure, hands down....good luck in the contest...though I doubt that you'll need it...Peace, Audrey

Poet Destroyer A April 14, 2010 at 12:08 PM Good lick in the contest. You are a good writer with a different flow. I mean nothing bad by that. P.D.

Charmaine Chircop April 12, 2010 at 4:24 PM I Loved the way you used Andrea's words..excellent indeed,wonderful to read..Charma

Sara Kendrick April 12, 2010 at 3:58 PM Great work that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown April 12, 2010 at 12:00 PM Enjoyed reading today Mitch. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy April 12, 2010 at 10:42 AM very nice good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments faleshia

Carolyn Devonshire April 12, 2010 at 6:57 AM The reader can see the birds circling and diving, Mitch. As a fisherman I enjoyed your topic and the *eloquent way in which you expressed the event. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 12, 2010 at 6:33 AM You've described euphoria pretty well here ,Mitch :) Perfect title to your engaging poem :) I wish you the ebst in Andrea's contest! :)

Doris Culverhouse April 12, 2010 at 6:30 AM different take on the contest!! good write!! Thanks for the comments!!

Lori Phipps April 11, 2010 at 2:32 PM I'm really enjoying reading your work. It is fabulous! I see this as a winner. Thank you for guiding me to this site also, I had been searching for an outlet for my own 'work,' and now I have one, thanks to you.- Lori Jean

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 11, 2010 at 8:04 AM WOW Mitch this is awesome...excellent use of Andrea's words and she will be thrilled at this entry..good luck and get ready for a trip to the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards April 11, 2010 at 7:43 AM This is a beauty, Mitch!! Perhaps inspired after a beautiful day in Bidwell Park? :) Lovely poem, and should do so well in the contest! ~ Love, Carrie

Caryl Muzzey April 11, 2010 at 7:15 AM Good luck in the contest with the wonderful write, I enjoyed it. Caryl