Laura Leiser Poet Tanka

Ethereal Songs

heaven's choirs rise
  jeweled clouds eclipsed in songs
     lifting spirits up
        hope dances round sun and moon
            as I witness angels sing
           



Written on 8/1/2016

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James Inman August 8, 2016 at 8:59 PM Lovely Laura. Laura Leiser August 8, 2016 at 9:17 PM Thank you, James :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 8, 2016 at 5:01 PM Back to congratulate you on your win with this beauty Laura! ; ) Laura Leiser August 8, 2016 at 9:17 PM Thanks very much, Connie:)

Winged Warrior August 8, 2016 at 2:31 PM Congrats!!! Laura on your well deserving win...great tanka my friend...god bless...^WW^ Laura Leiser August 8, 2016 at 9:16 PM Thank you, WW :)

Harry Horsman August 6, 2016 at 5:16 PM congratulations, this poetry is a gem Laura Leiser August 8, 2016 at 9:16 PM Thank you, Harry :)

Paul Callus August 6, 2016 at 8:37 AM You sure know how to lift our spirits up, Laura! I love your take on this nature theme...I'll sing along with you and the angels:) Congratulations!! // paul Laura Leiser August 8, 2016 at 9:14 PM Thank you, Paul! I'm glad this lifted your spirits :)

Joanna Daniel August 5, 2016 at 12:35 AM Ah! A heavenly tanka:) Congratulations on your win, Laura:) Laura Leiser August 5, 2016 at 4:09 PM Thanks, Jo :)

Sandra Haight August 4, 2016 at 10:38 PM Laura, congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser August 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM Thank you :)

Alexis Y. August 4, 2016 at 10:06 PM Hi Laura, This is a nice uplifting tanka. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -)

Mike Hauser August 4, 2016 at 9:35 PM Beautiful!

Tom Arnone August 4, 2016 at 7:56 PM Boy, If I ever actually see an angel, I will be in big trouble! ;-) Nice, uplifting tanka. Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 8:38 PM Ha! Thanks, Tom :)

Anisha Dutta August 4, 2016 at 7:26 PM Excellent composition Laura. Congrats to win Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 8:37 PM The Hank you, Anisha :)

Jan Allison August 4, 2016 at 6:57 PM Very uplifting Laura congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 8:37 PM Thank you, Jan :)

Tim Smith August 4, 2016 at 6:13 PM very lovely Laura...congrats on your win Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 8:37 PM Thanks, Tim :)

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2016 at 5:29 PM This is indeed ethereal, Laura. BIG congrats on your win. Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 6:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. And hope you are doing well, too :)

Nette Onclaud August 4, 2016 at 1:10 PM ohh, i float with the grace of your words, laura... well done!..huggs Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 5:59 PM Thank you, Nette :)

Mark Anthony Cotterman August 3, 2016 at 9:52 PM absolutely lovely!!! not many can write something that get read over and over like this one will. excellent write! Laura Leiser August 3, 2016 at 11:41 PM Thank you so very much, Mark! I really appreciate your kind words:)

CayCay Godwin August 2, 2016 at 9:22 PM I'm in love with this little gem. Way to go, Laura ... CayCay Laura Leiser August 2, 2016 at 10:29 PM Thanks for the kind compliment, CayCay! I appreciate it :)

Nette Onclaud August 2, 2016 at 12:24 PM ohh, i like the musical tone of your tanka, laura... bring it on!.. huggs Laura Leiser August 2, 2016 at 8:01 PM Thank you, Nette! Music always uplifts, doesn't it?!

Viv Wigley August 2, 2016 at 9:19 AM Very uplifting, Laura, love it. Viv x Laura Leiser August 2, 2016 at 12:03 PM Thank you, Viv!! :)

Anthony Mark August 2, 2016 at 8:31 AM Like it a lot,...great flow ...ian Laura Leiser August 2, 2016 at 8:00 PM Thank you, Teppo :) Laura Leiser August 2, 2016 at 12:03 PM Thanks, Ian :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 2, 2016 at 3:35 AM The heavenly light of sun and moon inspire Laura! I loved your expression of jeweled clouds, such a clever way to present the colors. Lovely! 7 ; ) Laura Leiser August 2, 2016 at 9:51 AM Thanks Connie! Glad you liked it:)

Ronald Kent August 1, 2016 at 4:36 PM Enjoyed the read and good luck with the contest. Laura Leiser August 1, 2016 at 5:14 PM Thanks, Ronald :)