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Ethereal Songs

heaven's choirs rise jeweled clouds eclipsed in songs lifting spirits up hope dances round sun and moon as I witness angels sing Written on 8/1/2016

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Date: 8/8/2016 8:59:00 PM
Lovely Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/8/2016 9:17:00 PM
Thank you, James :)
Date: 8/8/2016 5:01:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win with this beauty Laura! ; )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/8/2016 9:17:00 PM
Thanks very much, Connie:)
Date: 8/8/2016 2:31:00 PM
Congrats!!! Laura on your well deserving win...great tanka my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/8/2016 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, WW :)
Date: 8/6/2016 5:16:00 PM
congratulations, this poetry is a gem
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/8/2016 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, Harry :)
Date: 8/6/2016 8:37:00 AM
You sure know how to lift our spirits up, Laura! I love your take on this nature theme...I'll sing along with you and the angels:) Congratulations!! // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/8/2016 9:14:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! I'm glad this lifted your spirits :)
Date: 8/5/2016 12:35:00 AM
Ah! A heavenly tanka:) Congratulations on your win, Laura:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/5/2016 4:09:00 PM
Thanks, Jo :)
Date: 8/4/2016 10:38:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/5/2016 12:00:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 8/4/2016 10:06:00 PM
Hi Laura, This is a nice uplifting tanka. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -)
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Date: 8/4/2016 9:35:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:56:00 PM
Boy, If I ever actually see an angel, I will be in big trouble! ;-) Nice, uplifting tanka.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/4/2016 8:38:00 PM
Ha! Thanks, Tom :)
Date: 8/4/2016 7:26:00 PM
Excellent composition Laura. Congrats to win
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/4/2016 8:37:00 PM
The Hank you, Anisha :)
Date: 8/4/2016 6:57:00 PM
Very uplifting Laura congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/4/2016 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Jan :)
Date: 8/4/2016 6:13:00 PM
very lovely Laura...congrats on your win
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/4/2016 8:37:00 PM
Thanks, Tim :)
Date: 8/4/2016 5:29:00 PM
This is indeed ethereal, Laura. BIG congrats on your win.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/4/2016 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. And hope you are doing well, too :)
Date: 8/4/2016 1:10:00 PM
ohh, i float with the grace of your words, laura... well done!..huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/4/2016 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Nette :)
Date: 8/3/2016 9:52:00 PM
absolutely lovely!!! not many can write something that get read over and over like this one will. excellent write!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/3/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Mark! I really appreciate your kind words:)
Date: 8/2/2016 9:22:00 PM
I'm in love with this little gem. Way to go, Laura ... CayCay
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/2/2016 10:29:00 PM
Thanks for the kind compliment, CayCay! I appreciate it :)
Date: 8/2/2016 12:24:00 PM
ohh, i like the musical tone of your tanka, laura... bring it on!.. huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/2/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, Nette! Music always uplifts, doesn't it?!
Date: 8/2/2016 9:19:00 AM
Very uplifting, Laura, love it. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/2/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, Viv!! :)
Date: 8/2/2016 8:31:00 AM
Like it a lot,...great flow ...ian
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/2/2016 8:00:00 PM
Thank you, Teppo :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/2/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thanks, Ian :)
Date: 8/2/2016 3:35:00 AM
The heavenly light of sun and moon inspire Laura! I loved your expression of jeweled clouds, such a clever way to present the colors. Lovely! 7 ; )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/2/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Connie! Glad you liked it:)
Date: 8/1/2016 4:36:00 PM
Enjoyed the read and good luck with the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/1/2016 5:14:00 PM
Thanks, Ronald :)

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