Ethereal Painting of November Foliage

scarlet streaks of fair haired beauty across my transparent window
eager inspection shows ribbons of orange a bubble of yellow
new hampshire’s elms, oaks and sycamores are bursting
I feel humbled by the ultimate painter’s canvas
this ethereal painting cannot be replicated by mere man
squirrel stands for one second; is he admiring the scenery?
he pounces on walnut and is immediately rolled by an opponent
they scamper up the tree’s bark in a diagonal dance
other seasons cannot hope to compete with beauty of November
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Hankins Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 11:21 AM
a lovely poem, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 10:54 PM
Thank you Hank
Daniel Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 5:48 AM
True, this painting by the Creator is unmatched, lovely writing, Caren:)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 10:55 PM
No one can hope to achieve this
George Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 4:14 AM
The beauty of November and its changing colors are beautifully caught in your poem. Love the image of squirrels scampering up the trees...
Krutsinger Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 10:55 PM
Thank you Valsa we have lots of squirrels at my yard
Lawless Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Living in New England I get to see much of it unfold right before my eyes. Wonderfully done with magnificent imagery Caren...I think I know that squirrel.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 10:55 PM
I know you do John and so do I
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