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Ethereal

As we fell in love on a midnight hour
Sky lit up in a fairy dust shower
Perchance our love will flourish by the day
Ethereal angel for this I pray.

Amiable we’d be, I’m sure of that
We are meant for each other, it’s a fact
My loving arms would be ever wingspread
Ethereal angel, if we were wed.

We'd prep a paradise cosy and bright
Illuminated by moon and starlight
No need for electricity or heat 
For love would have us dancing on our feet.

Ethereal angel, just me and you
Or maybe joined by a cherub or two.

Copyright © Beryl Edmonds | Year Posted 2023

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Constance La France Date: 9/24/2023 7:19:00 AM Belle, wonderful, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your poem, and image, I see you changed your title after judging, nothing wrong with that, well done. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/26/2023 7:35:00 PM Changed the title back to Ethereal, sorry about that Constance. Thank you for the placement in your contest… Belle

Hiya Sharma Date: 9/14/2023 7:26:00 AM Oh my, this is such a gorgeous and love-filled poem that flows in the most delectable and angelic rhythm.. Your word choices are full of splendor and truly are sequined with 'Ethereal ambience'.. "Fairy dust shower", "paradise cosy and bright" Such beautiful word pairings here.. Best of luck for the contest, dear beautiful soul :) Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/14/2023 4:27:00 PM Thank you for such an encouraging review Hiya, I appreciate every single word… Belle

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/14/2023 5:38:00 AM Lovely and masterfully rendered. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/14/2023 4:25:00 PM Thank you very much Richard… Belle

Yann Rolland Date: 9/13/2023 6:44:00 PM so touching declaration, beautilfully penned, enjoyed yann Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/13/2023 7:02:00 PM Thank you Yann, pleased you enjoyed the read… Belle

Daniel Turner Date: 9/13/2023 6:25:00 PM Looking good young lady:) Love the photo! The eternal dance of love, what a thought:) Made me smile. Hoping you are well. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/13/2023 6:59:00 PM Thank you Daniel, haven’t been called a young lady for years, that made me smile. All’s well, hope it’s the same for you… Belle

Jerry Brotherton Date: 9/12/2023 6:44:00 PM A beautiful poem Belle. Best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/12/2023 6:57:00 PM Thank you Jerry ~ Blessings, Belle

Kenisha Shines Date: 9/12/2023 12:09:00 PM Lovely poem!All the best in the contest! Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/12/2023 1:33:00 PM Thank you so much Kenisha, most appreciated… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/12/2023 6:27:00 AM - A lovely poem, Belle :) - Your angel is shining :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/12/2023 1:33:00 PM Thank you very much Anne-Lise, if only Ethereal angels grew on trees :) Hugs, Belle

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/12/2023 5:03:00 AM Lovely. God bless you friend. Love, Gina Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/12/2023 7:01:00 AM Thank you Gina, God bless you too dear friend… Belle

John Read Date: 9/12/2023 2:36:00 AM Good luck in the contest sister Beryl, your poem deserves a top placing. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/12/2023 3:18:00 AM Time will tell, whatever happens it’s good to join in with poetry contests, they’re good for the muse. Thank you brother John… Sis Belle