Ethereal

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Wrtten - 12th September 2023

As we fell in love on a midnight hour Sky lit up in a fairy dust shower Perchance our love will flourish by the day Ethereal angel for this I pray. Amiable we’d be, I’m sure of that We are meant for each other, it’s a fact My loving arms would be ever wingspread Ethereal angel, if we were wed. We'd prep a paradise cosy and bright Illuminated by moon and starlight No need for electricity or heat For love would have us dancing on our feet. Ethereal angel, just me and you Or maybe joined by a cherub or two.

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Constance La France

Date: 9/24/2023 7:19:00 AM

Belle, wonderful, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your poem, and image, I see you changed your title after judging, nothing wrong with that, well done.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/26/2023 7:35:00 PM

Changed the title back to Ethereal, sorry about that Constance. Thank you for the placement in your contest… Belle

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/14/2023 7:26:00 AM

Oh my, this is such a gorgeous and love-filled poem that flows in the most delectable and angelic rhythm.. Your word choices are full of splendor and truly are sequined with 'Ethereal ambience'.. "Fairy dust shower", "paradise cosy and bright" Such beautiful word pairings here.. Best of luck for the contest, dear beautiful soul :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/14/2023 4:27:00 PM

Thank you for such an encouraging review Hiya, I appreciate every single word… Belle