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Eternity's Touch

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The black expansive depths, I plumb, Over blue marble, the sea of suns, Under a tapestry, dripping bright, Canticle written on endless night, Heaven, touch of the ages, come.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2017 7:35:00 PM

So sorry, Greg. don't feel bad. I am on a losing streak with several of the judges. Since I thought it was indeed a good write, I am faving you back!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/9/2017 9:10:00 PM

Awww ... you are VERY sweet, Andrea, thank you so much. I was feeling sorry for myself, I guess, lol, (rather immature), but I think it was because this one was so special to me ... not everyone likes the same ones I do, though, and that's life! You are very kind to give me the boost, Dear Friend - it means a great deal coming from someone I so admire. :-) <3

White Wolf

Date: 7/4/2017 2:45:00 AM

Awesome acrostic, Greg! If we don't see this on the winners' list something is wrong! And thank you kindly for reading my dribbles!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/7/2017 8:12:00 PM

Thanks so much, my friend - it did NOT make the list, sadly ... and I agree that there's something wrong with that.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2017 10:38:00 PM

WOW, this is a very lyrical acrostic and one of my favorites I have seen in this contest!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/3/2017 12:48:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Andrea - I'm so pleased you like this one! Your opinion is very important to me, as you are one of my favs here at PS! This was a lot of fun ... I haven't done many acrostics, but I plan to do more! :-) <3

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/26/2017 11:10:00 PM

Nice acrostic, creative content too, Greg:)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/26/2017 11:27:00 PM

Thank you, Jo - very kind of you ... I'm glad you enjoyed it!

John Hamilton

Date: 6/26/2017 1:51:00 PM

Very creative Greg, not sure I get it, but it sounds beautiful when read. 10 Points!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/26/2017 10:58:00 PM

Thanks, John - It's just a man standing under the stars, my friend ... wishing he could reach out and feel them, and hoping he does so when he leaves this world. :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/26/2017 10:05:00 AM

A beautiful creative Acrostic, Greg. Pls check rules regarding title. // paul

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/7/2017 8:18:00 PM

Seems some were acceptable DESPITE not having the correct title, yet I got no placement! That's life, right? ;-)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/26/2017 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Paul - I owe you one, my friend! :-)