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Eternity Efflux

Up the delicate dale of life,
at sensuous edge of sunk sky,
hollow horizon shimmers
with glow of pale passion. 

Down the contours of dream, 
frail desire stream meanders 
across the arcane mindscape 
to fading twilight obscurity. 

On the platitude plateau far,
the final flow ordained for
fusion with the supreme sea, 
the end embrace of peace. 

Suffused with sunset hues,
the eternity efflux earned 
slides with the serene soul 
into the benign bay of bliss.

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April 21, 2023

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Date: 4/23/2023 1:56:00 PM
Hi Subimal. This is a work I read a couple of times through. I sense - rightly or wrongly - a transcendental journey that you are taking the reader on. I'm no expert on the subject but there's something very spiritual here running through your words. Your free verse paints a very vivid and peaceful picture. Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest.
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Date: 4/22/2023 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara
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