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Eternity

You stand there, on the soft soil, Standing their forever, With your long green hair, And with a coarse brown chest, With a wide bulky body, Raising your welcoming arms, It rains, but you stay there, Green, You don't talk, and forever I wonder, Because you make me ask, Who am I compared to you? Who am I more than a living being? To you, there is nothing that I do mean, But there you are, There for Eternity

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Date: 7/16/2023 12:31:00 AM
I like this one because of the symbolic significance and the variety of interpretations it's open to.
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 7/16/2023 1:17:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words :-)
Date: 7/8/2023 3:13:00 PM
Very unique and interesting Arastu! Thank you for sharing your inspiration. Blessings.
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 7/8/2023 6:29:00 PM
Thank you Sam :-)

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