Linda Alice Fowler Poet Rhyme

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Eternity

Eternity ensues to mount	
from fertile vale above the mist.
Traverse the river past the turn.

Calm at the perpetual fount
and steady forth into the fist
of heady sun-struck silent burn. 

Encounter rare beauty to count 
and serenely sense heaven-kissed
soft, silent aerie space to yearn.

Drift in God’s righteous paramount, 
true philosophic pantheist.
Sup of all tantamount to learn.

The universe is elegance.
Be within it with vigilance.

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I Am Anaya June 18, 2023 at 11:34 AM Imagery of beauty and truths behold in your poetry bold and clearly we must worship our divine universe. A righteous doctrine, Linda! Linda Alice Fowler June 21, 2023 at 3:23 PM Many thanks dear friend! :)

Miranda Hawley June 14, 2023 at 6:23 PM You've used some epic sized adjectives to describe a heavenly paradise. Great images, with this masterpiece. Linda Alice Fowler June 15, 2023 at 1:24 PM You are very kind Miranda. Thank you for the thoughtful comment! :)

Michael Tor June 14, 2023 at 3:05 PM Such magic in your words Linda. It transforms the scenery in your mind. Linda Alice Fowler June 14, 2023 at 5:23 PM You are always so kind in your comments Michael. I appreciate you! :)

Victor Buhagiar June 14, 2023 at 6:00 AM Splendid spiritual poem. Linda Alice Fowler June 14, 2023 at 6:28 AM Thank you dear friend Victor! hugs :)

Joanna Daniel June 14, 2023 at 1:00 AM Love this, Linda, I chose the same image too:) p.s. check your syllables - 4th stanza Linda Alice Fowler June 14, 2023 at 6:28 AM Thank you for your comment on the poem Jo, and for the advice (which I took). However, it is not and entry in the Trilonnet contest. I'm grateful for your read and comment!! :)

Speaks Volumes June 13, 2023 at 10:18 PM Is this your Entry for E words Linda? or A description of image number one in the Trilonnet contest? A use of vibrant vocaulary and spectacular images, make it such a lovely poem to read. I am sure its will be a sure fire hit in either challenge. Well done, it set a high standard, as your poems usually do.. Linda Alice Fowler June 14, 2023 at 6:25 AM I wrote it for the Trilonnet contest but have not entered it because I don't want a NA for not putting the date, contest, sponsor, yada on the poem. I have another entry for the Entry for E contest. I revised the syllables as Jo recommended, and I revised my reply to Paula ma'am. :))

Paula Goldsmith June 13, 2023 at 1:14 PM Your "Eternity" is a lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day.......... Linda Alice Fowler June 13, 2023 at 1:40 PM Thank you Paula. I hope you are doing well and writing each day! Many beautiful thoughts doming your way! hugs :)