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Eternity

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Eternity ensues to mount from fertile vale above the mist. Traverse the river past the turn. Calm at the perpetual fount and steady forth into the fist of heady sun-struck silent burn. Encounter rare beauty to count and serenely sense heaven-kissed soft, silent aerie space to yearn. Drift in God’s righteous paramount, true philosophic pantheist. Sup of all tantamount to learn. The universe is elegance. Be within it with vigilance.

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I Am Anaya

Date: 6/18/2023 11:34:00 AM

Imagery of beauty and truths behold in your poetry bold and clearly we must worship our divine universe. A righteous doctrine, Linda!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/21/2023 3:23:00 PM

Many thanks dear friend! :)

Miranda Hawley

Date: 6/14/2023 6:23:00 PM

You've used some epic sized adjectives to describe a heavenly paradise. Great images, with this masterpiece.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/15/2023 1:24:00 PM

You are very kind Miranda. Thank you for the thoughtful comment! :)

Michael Tor

Date: 6/14/2023 3:05:00 PM

Such magic in your words Linda. It transforms the scenery in your mind.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/14/2023 5:23:00 PM

You are always so kind in your comments Michael. I appreciate you! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/14/2023 6:00:00 AM

Splendid spiritual poem.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/14/2023 6:28:00 AM

Thank you dear friend Victor! hugs :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/14/2023 1:00:00 AM

Love this, Linda, I chose the same image too:) p.s. check your syllables - 4th stanza

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/14/2023 6:28:00 AM

Thank you for your comment on the poem Jo, and for the advice (which I took). However, it is not and entry in the Trilonnet contest. I'm grateful for your read and comment!! :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/13/2023 10:18:00 PM

Is this your Entry for E words Linda? or A description of image number one in the Trilonnet contest? A use of vibrant vocaulary and spectacular images, make it such a lovely poem to read. I am sure its will be a sure fire hit in either challenge. Well done, it set a high standard, as your poems usually do..

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/14/2023 6:25:00 AM

I wrote it for the Trilonnet contest but have not entered it because I don't want a NA for not putting the date, contest, sponsor, yada on the poem. I have another entry for the Entry for E contest. I revised the syllables as Jo recommended, and I revised my reply to Paula ma'am. :))

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/13/2023 1:14:00 PM

Your "Eternity" is a lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day..........

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/13/2023 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Paula. I hope you are doing well and writing each day! Many beautiful thoughts doming your way! hugs :)