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Thrown from heavens tides, an embryonic entombment drowning in desire… For I have seen the face of an angel, bending realities before my despondent eyes… Where for the beats of my hapless heart, sending signals to your ravaging realm... I stand before you a christened Knight, my pulchritudinous princess of spades… A melancholy madman marooned on distant Dunes, as your daggers of love penetrate my pensive passion… And thus I stare at the monolithic moon, asking for twilight beams to chariot your embrace… For I am lost within your nebulous perfidious presence, and yet I wait for your return like a cataclysmic comet… Warping my space-time and hemorrhaging heart. ...background music Nox Arcana "Labyrinth of Dreams" ...from Grim Tales ...Male virtual voice July.02.2019 Slave to love Poetry Sponsored by: John Hamilton Placed 8'th...Thank You

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Date: 7/8/2019 12:42:00 AM
You are talented, I could never write like you do ^WW^ - you have poetic flair evident in all your poems. Well done, bravo, my friend for your wonderful and deserved win. Love, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/5/2019 8:34:00 PM
Congrats on your premiere win, WW. Powerful.
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Date: 7/4/2019 10:19:00 PM
Oh, my romantic bro bro of hapless heart, your passionate artistry knows no bounds. I was captured in the beauty of your masterful expression. You and our insane sis simply amaze this sane sissy. It’s wonderful for our crazy trio to be on this win list together. Congratulations on your excellent win. Love and hugs.. Illum <3
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Date: 7/4/2019 8:19:00 PM
WoW WW this is masterful writing you've outdone yourself in your singular style congrats on a fine placement in my premium contest!
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Date: 7/4/2019 8:10:00 PM
Bro bro... you and sane sissy knocked it out the park! Of course I being theinsane one am taking full credit for you guys win!Hahaha! Congrats bro bro!;)
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Date: 7/4/2019 7:46:00 PM
WW, this is so cool with the background music! Nice imagery! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/2/2019 6:37:00 PM
very romantic. Is it for the special soup contest?
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