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'eternally Yours'

You 
keeper
of secrets
your power so
domineering and
yet I can’t stay away...
You connect me to my friends
missing them are solved by one click
I feel empty and lost without you 
I love you my phone, eternally yours...

*was initially written for Drake's contest*
but too late decided to post it anyway lol :)

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2011 12:45:00 PM

hahaha good one, missy! I actually thought this was a write that would reveal what that writing in the sky said, boohoo--ok fine-o your phone's more powerful then :p & happy you liked that crazy right-- that photo was just too adorable to pass up! thanks for dropping by, now I will just be a secret keeper for somebody else... hugs missy :)

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 3/11/2011 9:36:00 AM

An instant winner in my book. I love how abstanct your punchline is.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/10/2011 6:27:00 PM

Too bad, Wilma. Excellent write, would have done well in the contest. Thanks for posting it in any event. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for your gracious comments. luv Ralph

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/9/2011 3:07:00 PM

Shame it would of done real well Im sure... But Im glad you posted it anyway.. Hopr your well, another crazy week hers again, hope yours is less hectic...love from me to you always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 12:16:00 AM

oh, darn, didn't you make it in? That is such a bummer. I don't have such deep feelings for my phone. She is like a foreigner to me. hahaha

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/8/2011 3:34:00 PM

Yes, good thought we can't live without all modern gadgets, Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2011 3:15:00 PM

Good one..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by ..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2011 10:03:00 AM

Very good write, Wilma. Without the phone or the computer, I'd have little contact with friends. You make a good point, and I'm sorry you missed the contest deadline. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2011 7:13:00 AM

Very good Etheree. i even surf the net with my mobile !

Judy Konos

Date: 3/8/2011 6:23:00 AM

Reminds me of the "Infernal Revenue" Thanks....for the chuckle...

James Fraser

Date: 3/8/2011 5:30:00 AM

I'd be lost without my phone as well Wilma. They are terrific little gems nowadays. Where are the hickeys she politely asks, that's the secret within the Limerick sassy lassie. Have a lovely day, and good luck in the Drake's contest....:) smiles