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Eternal Touch

They found each other when time changed course unhindered, at destinations that had never known routes drawn by the call of their karma, they dance blind, the saga of two universes, and their thirst for one another songs get rewritten in the brilliance of their mystery worlds left behind helpless, from earlier times ruthless in their hunger, they are destin to bury old promises and hopes, disappearing from forgotten futures... They had known each other through Time's fatal force undaunted by the wreckage of starved stars, magnetized by the miracle of electric love ore, a Master and a Mistress of cosmic kiss, serving one another appetites of ancient arousal flourished between their flames, cravings becoming concepts of breath with logic lost to instinct, living commandments of creation, lightening and comets at their command, shadows and sands besiege many plans, yet their universe withstands - A Collaboration From The Quills of Bindu & Justin

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/1/2015 8:58:00 PM

Burying old promises stood out in this write. A master and mistress of cosmic kiss of arousal...The passion here is intense between two souls. Their universe withstands....what a climax of an ending.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/1/2015 9:25:00 PM

Lovely comment, Justin

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/1/2015 9:22:00 PM

Sometimes a treasure gets buried to safegaurd it from the storm of Fate's greed, yet the promise of love remains Eileen...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/18/2015 3:56:00 PM

So So Beautiful Bindu and Justin!!Charma

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/19/2015 8:18:00 PM

Love beyond destruction is beautiful Charma...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/15/2015 1:14:00 AM

"cravings becoming concepts of breath with logic lost to instinct, living commandments of creation, lightening and comets at their command" Those lines are simply glorious..you guys have put me in awe... thanks dears for posting! <3 Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/15/2015 1:19:00 PM

There is an inherent, natural rhythm of beauty and purpose in this poem that I am very proud of, and I'm inspired by our seamless connection, and we have so much to teach and learn, and we feel empowered by one another. I'm thrilled that you are fascinated with this passionate wisdom, and I thank you for your excited evaluation as always Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/15/2015 1:10:00 AM

Both of you write quite distinctively, and yet together, as a collaboration, everything just makes perfect sense, and this is very beautiful! Though distinctive, you two share the same spirit it seems - you write dreamily, honestly, daringly. I absolutely love this composition! You both are born to survive and withstand all that is thrown your way! "ruthless in their hunger, they are destin to bury old promises and hopes, disappearing from forgotten futures..." That is such a mysterious line..

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/15/2015 1:09:00 PM

The metaphysics, metaphors and passion of our vibrant spirit intertwine with effortless passion...Bindu and I have discovered a dance of destiny. This composition is what I call an Impromptu Collaboration, because it was achieved via spontaneous prana between us. It was not planned, discussed, or revised...its pure poetry between two souls Laura...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/14/2015 9:03:00 AM

magnetize by the miracle... that's a nice line.. :) and a master and mistress of.. :)! wow!! very descriptive and the lines are really captivating!!//olive eloisa.. :) thanks for the placement.! :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/14/2015 3:52:00 PM

The magnetism of souls is a force that cannot be denied Olive...the cosmos orchestrates the natural harmonies of unions. Your poem radiates steller love and skill that must be known beautiful Poetess...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/14/2015 4:38:00 AM

Ethereal phantoms come to light with this write, Justin. Bindu is a very powerful woman of great talent, beauty, and strength. I speak the truth in this regard. You have finally found someone who speaks your language, Eagle. Keep soaring...and hush those stars that you vanquished with your cosmic kiss. Life is to be lived in the epic. That is true. It's too short...life, to be half lived. This is a song of victory. Live it to the max.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/14/2015 2:19:00 PM

She and I speak a language of passion unlearnt, primordial in creative purpose. Together, we've become a new culture of fierce survival, an art of awareness. We fuel the stars Eileen...J.A.B.

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 3/14/2015 2:57:00 AM

Very up lifting. No fatal flaws here. Only FLAMES of glory.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/14/2015 1:57:00 PM

The glory of wisdom and passion spreading fires of fearless beauty my friend, thank you Val. J.A.B.