Eternal Teardrops

I come once again my love to your resting place,
     where roses grow beside  s t o n e s  beautifully forlorn;
           I am lost in a huge sea of cold tombs and space,
my long golden hair is like a wave that flows.
     When you died, my love, my heart broke and just froze,
            those old drums of  T I M E  ceased for you and now, I mourn;
                  rain from above falls like your teardrops on my  f a c e .

This place-  a picture of serenity and grace,
     my eternal  t e a r d r o p s  come like a sea new born;
           I am weather-stained with tears time cannot erase,
my life is a RAVAGED garden where nothing grows.
     I wear a veil of mourning and hold a dead rose.
           my spirit is  E T E R N A L L Y stone cold and torn;
                with eternal teardrops-   your stone, I embrace.

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August 7, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Eternal Teardrops
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1050-576-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Rhyme Time 6,  Verses of Metaphors 
sponsor, Laura Loo, Theme #6- Eternal teardrops

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/11/2018 5:55:00 AM
As always, amazing sweet Dear Heart...great rhythm, rhyme and imagery with intense emotion...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement...:)-luloo
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