Tahera Mannan Poet Rhyme

Eternal Rainbow

An eternal rainbow in the sky
Blue as the pain in those tiger eyes
Green as the fields of yesterday
Luscious, sparkling fruit in winter ray
Grey hides both black and white
A butterfly, a symphony that sounds alright
Indigo a harbinger of storms
That over the sky in savageness roams
Orange a dancer, sultry and sweet
Wearing anklets of stars on delicate feet
Red the crimson blood in my heart
Those flowers and apples in some cart
Violet a fragile lilac bloom
The brilliant plume, the hidden perfume
Yellow the sweet juice from the mango
A million lamps lit in a row
 An eternal rainbow in the sky
Free my soul and let it fly

26/9/12

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Patrick Boyle April 6, 2013 at 1:13 PM Great

Abhinav Guha October 11, 2012 at 2:20 AM This is a really beautiful and colorful poem. Lovely work! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown October 1, 2012 at 6:14 AM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick September 30, 2012 at 2:18 PM A most colourful and free flying piece Tahera, I can see it as well worth the win.."

Kulsum Mehmood September 30, 2012 at 12:05 AM Colorful and beautifully written poem. Very good rhyming too. Thanks for sharing and congrats for the win Tahera.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 29, 2012 at 8:55 PM CONGRATS TAHERA ON A LOVELY WRITE AND WIN FOR BEAUTIFUL RAINBOW DELIGHT LUV ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 29, 2012 at 8:35 AM So colourful, congratulations on your win xx

Irfana Ali Bhat September 29, 2012 at 5:56 AM described each colour beautifully....congrats on ur win...:)))))))))))

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen September 29, 2012 at 4:20 AM Absolutely beautiful. Congratulations!

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2012 at 12:15 AM Tahera, I'm having tons of rainbow fun ;-) reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, ,,thank you for inspiring the contest...goodnight~ xox~ PD Tahera Mannan September 29, 2012 at 2:34 AM Thanks PD for my placement in your contest.

Jon A Cavanaugh September 28, 2012 at 4:23 PM I love the way you illuminate each color. Lovely poem. Well done.I wish I had more time to spend on the soup. I know I'm missing out on a lot of wonderful poems. But I'm glad I got to yours.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 28, 2012 at 8:39 AM SO ENCHANTING AND BEAUTIFUL TAHERA .. VIVID IMAGERY PREVAILS LUV .. WINNING WISHES FOR U AND HAPPY WEEKEND TOO..

Kash Poet September 27, 2012 at 4:33 AM What a colorful poem this one is!!Love this?

Robert Pettit September 26, 2012 at 11:36 PM Nice, colorfully descriptive write about a rainbow and its colors.

Chidozie Uche O. September 26, 2012 at 2:31 AM Wonderful description of Rainbow..... " Blue as pain in those tiger's eyes" good line and many more, nice work of great reflection

Karen Deeks September 26, 2012 at 2:12 AM lovely dream like flight through colours as espressive forces of emotional triggers...tyvm karen

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday September 26, 2012 at 1:59 AM How brilliant and inspiring ! The freedom to touch this beautiful eternal rainbow...Cheers !