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Eternal Rainbow

An eternal rainbow in the sky
Blue as the pain in those tiger eyes
Green as the fields of yesterday
Luscious, sparkling fruit in winter ray
Grey hides both black and white
A butterfly, a symphony that sounds alright
Indigo a harbinger of storms
That over the sky in savageness roams
Orange a dancer, sultry and sweet
Wearing anklets of stars on delicate feet
Red the crimson blood in my heart
Those flowers and apples in some cart
Violet a fragile lilac bloom
The brilliant plume, the hidden perfume
Yellow the sweet juice from the mango
A million lamps lit in a row
 An eternal rainbow in the sky
Free my soul and let it fly

26/9/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/6/2013 1:13:00 PM
Great
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Date: 10/11/2012 2:20:00 AM
This is a really beautiful and colorful poem. Lovely work! :)
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 2:18:00 PM
A most colourful and free flying piece Tahera, I can see it as well worth the win.."
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Date: 9/30/2012 12:05:00 AM
Colorful and beautifully written poem. Very good rhyming too. Thanks for sharing and congrats for the win Tahera.
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Date: 9/29/2012 8:55:00 PM
CONGRATS TAHERA ON A LOVELY WRITE AND WIN FOR BEAUTIFUL RAINBOW DELIGHT LUV ..
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Date: 9/29/2012 8:35:00 AM
So colourful, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 9/29/2012 5:56:00 AM
described each colour beautifully....congrats on ur win...:)))))))))))
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Date: 9/29/2012 4:20:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/29/2012 12:15:00 AM
Tahera, I'm having tons of rainbow fun ;-) reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, ,,thank you for inspiring the contest...goodnight~ xox~ PD
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 9/29/2012 2:34:00 AM
Thanks PD for my placement in your contest.
Date: 9/28/2012 4:23:00 PM
I love the way you illuminate each color. Lovely poem. Well done.I wish I had more time to spend on the soup. I know I'm missing out on a lot of wonderful poems. But I'm glad I got to yours.
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Date: 9/28/2012 8:39:00 AM
SO ENCHANTING AND BEAUTIFUL TAHERA .. VIVID IMAGERY PREVAILS LUV .. WINNING WISHES FOR U AND HAPPY WEEKEND TOO..
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Date: 9/27/2012 4:33:00 AM
What a colorful poem this one is!!Love this?
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Date: 9/26/2012 11:36:00 PM
Nice, colorfully descriptive write about a rainbow and its colors.
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Date: 9/26/2012 2:31:00 AM
Wonderful description of Rainbow..... " Blue as pain in those tiger's eyes" good line and many more, nice work of great reflection
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Date: 9/26/2012 2:12:00 AM
lovely dream like flight through colours as espressive forces of emotional triggers...tyvm karen
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Date: 9/26/2012 1:59:00 AM
How brilliant and inspiring ! The freedom to touch this beautiful eternal rainbow...Cheers !
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