Eternal Love or Fleeting Burns?

You say you’ll love her till the day you die 
But when she feels unwanted and broken inside 
Will you hold her and tell her she’s enough 
When she’s tired of pretending to be tough

Will you love her when she’s a mess
Her hair in a bun, her face not at its best 
When she is cranky, mean and sour
Will you make her laugh for an hour?

When she wears funky socks on her feet
Will you love her when she isn’t neat?
And when she wants peace and quiet 
Will you love her in the deafening silence?

When her hands tremble and shake with anxiety
When she’s being tormented by society
Will you stand with her, in the loud mess
Will you love her when she’s deep in distress?

When her skin becomes wrinkled and dry
And her joints crack and groan with a sigh
Will you help her rest, relax and heal
Will you love her even when you have to kneel?
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Agustin Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 2:23 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gupta Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 11:16 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and warm welcome! I’m really grateful you took the time to read and respond to my poem. Your encouragement truly means a lot. And thank you for sharing such a meaningful verse!k
Seeker Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Beautiful! That’s what true love is about.
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