Eternal Love

Love is sweet when pure
broken hearts are meeting
wishing for the love more


the everlasting sacredness of love
beautify the actions of us
purify the hearts of all in love

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Date: 3/21/2019 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful...Muhammad. Enjoyed It Much! Vickie
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Date: 2/28/2018 7:21:00 PM
A lovely sweet poem you chosen to be your first poem on here. True love is eternal. A warm belated welcome to poetrysoup. Hugs
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/28/2018 10:55:00 PM
Thanks a lot Cecilia...............i am happy i found your poetry............it has lot of meaning for me
Date: 2/28/2018 12:41:00 AM
I do think love is eternal. Congrats on your placement. Thank you for coming to read my Lost Boys :)
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/28/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thanks Debbie ,,, i will like to read more........if you can tell me about your favourites
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/28/2018 1:41:00 AM
thanks Debbie............for beautiful wishes...., i like your style ....i will read more from your collection
Date: 2/27/2018 2:01:00 PM
Thank you for your comments...This poetry is a little confusing to me - but, I will say 'Amen' to that anyway!!!...rg
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/27/2018 11:03:00 PM
Hi Rhoda ..this poem tells that pure love has such a magical effect that it heals the broken hearts and love between the people who were devoid of it earlier increases ...... and consequently all our actions move on the positive side , there is no more negative minds and it affect our morals and ultimately love improves our morals and a society is developed based on goodness............
Date: 2/26/2018 6:29:00 PM
It is my pleasure. Please let me know when you have posted a new piece.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/26/2018 11:42:00 PM
Yes sure, i will....thanks for following me...
Date: 2/26/2018 7:21:00 AM
Come back again to congratulate you, I m gpad that you get 3rd position in the contest, good luck and congratulations once again
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Date: 2/26/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thanks a Lot Dear Fraz
Date: 2/26/2018 3:34:00 AM
short and true. loved it
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/26/2018 4:19:00 AM
thanks Anna........for beautiful comment
Date: 2/24/2018 6:26:00 PM
Charming love poem. Congrats on your win, Muhammad.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 10:34:00 PM
Hi Gauthier Many thanks for your wishes. really appreciated
Date: 2/24/2018 2:29:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Muhammad, and welcome to the soup! Regards,. VIV
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 10:35:00 PM
Hi Viv.......Bundle of thanks for your nice wishes .
Date: 2/24/2018 1:16:00 PM
You have described so much deep emotions in such a short poem, a well written one, yeah the love should be eternal otherwise an incomplete love can destroy the lives of many peoples, love is like a rubber, if one leave it, it will hurt the other,
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 1:44:00 PM
yes you are right, the love must be complete............agreed
Date: 2/24/2018 7:58:00 AM
A belated welcome to the soup. I thought I would start with your first gift to the soup. I am not disappointed.
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Date: 2/24/2018 11:30:00 AM
Hi Richard Many thanks for warm wishes and your time to come to visit my collection. I am so happy to see you here; this itself is a gift for me............
Date: 2/23/2018 10:38:00 AM
so much said in such few words ,lovely poem, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 2/23/2018 11:10:00 AM
Hi LAURA thanks for your lovely comments and wishes.Now i myslef don't believe that how i said these words............. ............
Date: 2/11/2018 1:32:00 PM
Hi Muhammad, LOVE is just as important as TRUTH. They both feed each other. You don't need correcting on whether your poem is a triolet or not...the words speak for themselves.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/12/2018 12:13:00 AM
Thanks Leanne...for your kind words of appreciation and sincere comments............. Actually, i am not a regular poet, the only thing i know is that poetry is a sweet mode of passing your ideas, message... Have a lovely and joyful day
Date: 2/8/2018 3:13:00 PM
This is lovely (though it is not a triolet) It was nice seeing your very first post here.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/10/2018 11:00:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for your kind words of appreciation
Date: 1/27/2018 8:54:00 PM
Deep emotions beautifully expressed Muhammad. A wonderful triolet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 1/27/2018 10:37:00 PM
Thanks Susan.it is really encouraging
Date: 1/14/2018 1:10:00 AM
You have captured the essence of romance in a prayer we all should recite. Beautiful. Keep writing please. Best regards David in NZ
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 1/14/2018 1:45:00 AM
Dear David I am very pleased for your beautiful comments ...thanks and have a beautiful life ahead BR Muhammad
Date: 12/25/2017 2:20:00 PM
I love this one Muhammad, great write to purify
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 12/25/2017 10:42:00 PM
Thanks Lewis for your beautiful words
Date: 12/4/2017 10:47:00 AM
A very nice written short poem, welcome to poetrysoup
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Date: 11/22/2017 12:44:00 PM
A sweet little poem, Muhammad. A welcome to Soup from me as well!
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/22/2017 12:47:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea..........for appreciation . I am not professional but poetry is a beautiful way of talking
Date: 9/29/2017 7:55:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Muhammad. A beautiful Triolet you have written here...Maria
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 9/29/2017 8:50:00 AM
if there is some improvement required in what i had written, i would really appreciate it. thanks muhammad
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 9/29/2017 8:49:00 AM
Thanks dear friend MARIA, you comments are very encouraging for me. Thanks for your lovely words
Date: 9/27/2017 4:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem...You should post more
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 9/27/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Silent One, Yes i will do it .
Date: 1/14/2017 7:55:00 AM
- Welcome Muhammad with your first poem here at the; POETRY SOUP :)
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 9/26/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine , i will upload my other verses as well
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