Eternal Love

Love is sweet when pure
broken hearts are meeting
wishing for the love more


the everlasting sacredness of love
beautify the actions of us
purify the hearts of all in love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Thayer Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful...Muhammad. Enjoyed It Much! Vickie
Macfarlane Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 7:21 PM
A lovely sweet poem you chosen to be your first poem on here. True love is eternal. A warm belated welcome to poetrysoup. Hugs
Imtiaz Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 10:55 PM
Thanks a lot Cecilia...............i am happy i found your poetry............it has lot of meaning for me
Duncan Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 12:41 AM
I do think love is eternal. Congrats on your placement. Thank you for coming to read my Lost Boys :)
Imtiaz Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Thanks Debbie ,,, i will like to read more........if you can tell me about your favourites
Imtiaz Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 1:41 AM
thanks Debbie............for beautiful wishes...., i like your style ....i will read more from your collection
Galgiani Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Thank you for your comments...This poetry is a little confusing to me - but, I will say 'Amen' to that anyway!!!...rg
Imtiaz Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Hi Rhoda ..this poem tells that pure love has such a magical effect that it heals the broken hearts and love between the people who were devoid of it earlier increases ...... and consequently all our actions move on the positive side , there is no more negative minds and it affect our morals and ultimately love improves our morals and a society is developed based on goodness............
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 6:29 PM
It is my pleasure. Please let me know when you have posted a new piece.
Imtiaz Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 11:42 PM
Yes sure, i will....thanks for following me...
Ajmal Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Come back again to congratulate you, I m gpad that you get 3rd position in the contest, good luck and congratulations once again
Imtiaz Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thanks a Lot Dear Fraz
Flower Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:34 AM
short and true. loved it
Imtiaz Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 4:19 AM
thanks Anna........for beautiful comment
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Charming love poem. Congrats on your win, Muhammad.
Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Hi Gauthier Many thanks for your wishes. really appreciated
Wigley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Congrats on your placement, Muhammad, and welcome to the soup! Regards,. VIV
Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 10:35 PM
Hi Viv.......Bundle of thanks for your nice wishes .
Ajmal Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 1:16 PM
You have described so much deep emotions in such a short poem, a well written one, yeah the love should be eternal otherwise an incomplete love can destroy the lives of many peoples, love is like a rubber, if one leave it, it will hurt the other,
Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 1:44 PM
yes you are right, the love must be complete............agreed
Lamoureux Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 7:58 AM
A belated welcome to the soup. I thought I would start with your first gift to the soup. I am not disappointed.
Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Hi Richard Many thanks for warm wishes and your time to come to visit my collection. I am so happy to see you here; this itself is a gift for me............
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:38 AM
so much said in such few words ,lovely poem, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Imtiaz Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Hi LAURA thanks for your lovely comments and wishes.Now i myslef don't believe that how i said these words............. ............
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February 11, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Hi Muhammad, LOVE is just as important as TRUTH. They both feed each other. You don't need correcting on whether your poem is a triolet or not...the words speak for themselves.
Imtiaz Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 12:13 AM
Thanks Leanne...for your kind words of appreciation and sincere comments............. Actually, i am not a regular poet, the only thing i know is that poetry is a sweet mode of passing your ideas, message... Have a lovely and joyful day
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 3:13 PM
This is lovely (though it is not a triolet) It was nice seeing your very first post here.
Imtiaz Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 11:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for your kind words of appreciation
Ashley Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Deep emotions beautifully expressed Muhammad. A wonderful triolet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Imtiaz Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Thanks Susan.it is really encouraging
Smith Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 1:10 AM
You have captured the essence of romance in a prayer we all should recite. Beautiful. Keep writing please. Best regards David in NZ
Imtiaz Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 1:45 AM
Dear David I am very pleased for your beautiful comments ...thanks and have a beautiful life ahead BR Muhammad
Raynes Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 2:20 PM
I love this one Muhammad, great write to purify
Imtiaz Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Thanks Lewis for your beautiful words
Ajmal Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 10:47 AM
A very nice written short poem, welcome to poetrysoup
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 12:44 PM
A sweet little poem, Muhammad. A welcome to Soup from me as well!
Imtiaz Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 12:47 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea..........for appreciation . I am not professional but poetry is a beautiful way of talking
Williams Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:55 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Muhammad. A beautiful Triolet you have written here...Maria
Imtiaz Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:50 AM
if there is some improvement required in what i had written, i would really appreciate it. thanks muhammad
Imtiaz Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Thanks dear friend MARIA, you comments are very encouraging for me. Thanks for your lovely words
One Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:49 AM
Beautiful poem...You should post more
Imtiaz Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Thanks Silent One, Yes i will do it .
Andresen Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 7:55 AM
- Welcome Muhammad with your first poem here at the; POETRY SOUP :)
Imtiaz Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Thanks Sunshine , i will upload my other verses as well
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