Eternal Love

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John Michaels

Date: 5/22/2014 5:33:00 AM

Very nice... love the sentiment behind it; very wistful, but not overindulgent.

James Fraser

Date: 6/5/2010 5:59:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Robert, so many service men and woman will relate to this gem. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest. As a Scotsman, we should be referred to as Scot's. Scotch to me is Whiskey or sticky tape. I think people change things for changes sake. Have a lovely weekend >> James

John Freeman

Date: 5/17/2010 6:31:00 PM

Awesome job , my friend on this worthy one. "CONGRATULATIONS" ON A #4 WIN, enjoy! Agape, Moses

Rick Parise

Date: 5/17/2010 5:23:00 PM

Thanks for your nice works Robert~Blessings to you!~Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2010 4:35:00 PM

Congrats Bob on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest .. more awesome words from your gifted pen and a perfect portrayal of the photo presented...enjoy another win my friend.. with luf from the "Sweetheart"

Rick Parise

Date: 5/17/2010 3:59:00 PM

Nice work Robert~~Congrats~Rick

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2010 3:28:00 PM

Bob, congratulations on placing fourth in the contest with this moving poem! Best wishes, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2010 3:59:00 AM

Amazing and apt interpretation Good luck in the contest

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/15/2010 7:18:00 PM

Yes, Bob I'm currently in a poetic funk but "it too shall come to pass" - hopefully. Thanks for your thoughts - my best to you and Vera. - Ralph

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/15/2010 6:07:00 PM

Well done, Bob. Good luck in the contest. Nice weekend, Ralph.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/15/2010 5:21:00 PM

Oh Bob u never cease to amaze me with your great words of wonder and romance.. intriguing portrayal of the photo for the contest.. good luck...luv. from the "Sweetheart"