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Eternal Love

though clouds cast a pall

     soldier vows eternal love

          'til they meet again


Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed 4th in Carolyn Devonshire's Sunset Silhouette Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/22/2014 5:33:00 AM
Very nice... love the sentiment behind it; very wistful, but not overindulgent.
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:59:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku Robert, so many service men and woman will relate to this gem. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest. As a Scotsman, we should be referred to as Scot's. Scotch to me is Whiskey or sticky tape. I think people change things for changes sake. Have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 5/17/2010 6:31:00 PM
Awesome job , my friend on this worthy one. "CONGRATULATIONS" ON A #4 WIN, enjoy! Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:23:00 PM
Thanks for your nice works Robert~Blessings to you!~Rick
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:35:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest .. more awesome words from your gifted pen and a perfect portrayal of the photo presented...enjoy another win my friend.. with luf from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:59:00 PM
Nice work Robert~~Congrats~Rick
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Date: 5/17/2010 3:28:00 PM
Bob, congratulations on placing fourth in the contest with this moving poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:59:00 AM
Amazing and apt interpretation Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/15/2010 7:18:00 PM
Yes, Bob I'm currently in a poetic funk but "it too shall come to pass" - hopefully. Thanks for your thoughts - my best to you and Vera. - Ralph
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Date: 5/15/2010 6:07:00 PM
Well done, Bob. Good luck in the contest. Nice weekend, Ralph.
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Date: 5/15/2010 5:21:00 PM
Oh Bob u never cease to amaze me with your great words of wonder and romance.. intriguing portrayal of the photo for the contest.. good luck...luv. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:38:00 PM
You tell a whole story in three lines...well done, Robert! (I loved your funny comment on mine!! :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:30:00 PM
"HELLO! BOB. how are you . Hoping U R fine, continue your good writes, and thanks for the comment,,IRMA
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:24:00 PM
enjoying the haikus, impressive,..p.d.
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:21:00 PM
I liked it the first time, too. Sweet poem. :-)
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