Swetha Vangaveti Poet Free verse

Eternal Love

Come, dear Krishna!
Fall in love with my love for you.
When my honey- filled glance dips your  unsurpassed beauty, fall in love with my eyes. 
Fall in love with my imperishable ardour for you. 
When my feet dance to the tunes of your flute, fall in love with the music of my anklets. 

You are the colossal cosmos and I'm an infinitesimal splinter
You are the sweetness in a mellowed fruit and I'm the wrinkle on a withered flower.
You are the dream of every soul and I'm a forsaken lonely petal 
But, oh darling! when you assimilate me into you, we become one. 

Melt in the music of my longing for you 
Fill the flute of my desolate heart with your benign breath
Kindle my lame soul with the shimmer of your smile
Let's sing, let's swing and let's dissolve in this darkness tonight.

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Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2019 at 1:04 AM Poetic genius. "Fill the flute of my desolate heart with your benign breath Kindle my lame soul with the shimmer of your smile" LOVE this part especially, Swetha. Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:23 AM Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments Caren :)

Paul Callus September 10, 2019 at 12:56 PM Absolutely beautiful, Swetha. A poem worth reading more than once, bathing in its romantic essence. a fav for me. ~ Regards // paul Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:22 AM Thank you so much Paul :)

Brenda Chiri September 10, 2019 at 8:51 AM Beautifully written!;) Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:21 AM Thanks a lot :)

Richard Lamoureux September 7, 2019 at 1:51 PM What a scrumptious piece. Such vivid imagery. Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:20 AM Thank you Richard :) Everything is lovely when the eyes are filled with love. :)

Carolyn Devonshire September 6, 2019 at 12:26 PM Swetha, you have a romantic heart and the reader can feel the passion in this amazing poem. Excellent and a fave! Hugs, carolyn Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:20 AM Thanks a lot Carolyn. Hugs from India. :)

Joseph P. DiMino September 6, 2019 at 6:13 AM You are far from infinitesimal--make of the creator, a fountain of Universal Love and presence. Beautiful writing! Thank you for sharing. Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:10 AM Thanks a lot for the lovely words Joe. They mean a lot. :)

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2019 at 5:43 PM this is just fabulous!! A fave! Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:08 AM Thank you Andrea :)

Pashang Salehi September 2, 2019 at 9:20 PM "What is real can’t be unreal..." Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:04 AM True Pashang. :)

Geoffrey Brewer August 29, 2019 at 5:00 AM A beautiful sensual, yet pure love song, calling on the essence of the Hindu tradition condensed into a personal relationship. Very impressive, Swetha. Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:04 AM Thanks a ton Geoffrey :)

Kaveesha Ruwindi August 27, 2019 at 8:47 PM Wow! amazing words! well done! :) Swetha Vangaveti September 27, 2019 at 7:03 AM Thanks a lot Kaveesha :)