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Eternal Is Death's Life

Lost this day, breaths drop like a flatline ripped from you pitilessly, mourning is a temporal option: all attempts to capture gentle moments, now done, gone-- yet, not everlasting evermore. Such demise is but a pause, a furnace beaming; and we will hold each other beyond earthly realms that I will never ask where you are, unafraid of the moon rising from its throne : Although a willow droops around a grave we are here: you, radiating light beyond vales, I, flowing with a spirit from another heaven... Then, generously laugh with me, dance our song of angel-harp and plumed marigolds-- for life unto death is beauty eternal timeless as a cross' glorious renewal. Anthony Slausen's Life of Death Contest 4/4/2018

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Date: 4/10/2018 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. Laugh, dance and sing, as the cycle continues. Kai
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Date: 4/9/2018 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on a beautiful winning poem, nette.
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Date: 4/9/2018 12:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
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Date: 4/7/2018 12:22:00 PM
Excellent write, Nette, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/4/2018 11:18:00 AM
Beautiful lines, especially the last stanza and the imagery in 'angel harp and plumed marigolds.'
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Date: 4/4/2018 12:26:00 AM
Excellent depiction. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/3/2018 11:36:00 PM
Powerful work here - you deal with the biggest issue here - death. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:59:00 PM
Envelope, please...and the winner is...(((nette)))...stay in the light my friend...^WW^
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:32:00 PM
I can't think of anything to say except, WOW. This will be hard to top, nette. Great job! This has got to be one of your best (IMO)
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:35:00 PM
And one day we will all dance with death, but hopefully new life too. Good luck Nette. Tom
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:28:00 PM
Wonderful poem, nette. I particularly love your title.
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:27:00 PM
Awesome depiction, as always..reassuring thoughts like:such demise is but a pause,.. and life unto death is beauty eternal..well done, nette!
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Date: 4/3/2018 4:04:00 PM
And we live if only to pause and live again. Eloquent poetry made in heaven and on earth!
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Date: 4/3/2018 3:49:00 PM
Agree..."for life unto death is beauty eternal timeless as a cross' glorious renewal." All the best nette...
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