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Eternal Existence Evaporating

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Existence evaporating in loves empty extinguishing, Resistance resonating amidst forthcoming futile exile; Distance desecrating dreams dormant diminishing, Subsistence sacrificial amongst hominids hostile. *** *** *** *** *** Disappearing divinity divergent of idols imaging, Fearing forever fading loves upon vacant voids; Appearing apparitions abandoned forever finishing, Domineering demons dispatching destructive droids. ...this lento can also be read backward... Jan.23.2020 Let's Write a Lento Sponsored by: Dear Heart Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Constance La France

Date: 2/10/2020 1:48:00 PM

WW, congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2020 5:53:00 PM

Nicely done, w w. Big congrats.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2020 5:34:00 PM

Superb alliteration in your deep dark lento, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

Maria Williams

Date: 1/30/2020 9:32:00 PM

Yes I agree with Son of Spock, John, you are the King of Alliteration and internal rhyme as well. Complicated stuff this form, but you've mastered it well, so well....Maria Hugs

Maria Williams
Date: 1/30/2020 9:32:00 PM

Oh and best wishes for the contest ...Hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/29/2020 2:21:00 AM

Wow and wow again, what a winning poem, never done a lento, but judging from the excellence of this write, it is a Win -g - ster! Blessings and poetry hugs, Jennster.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/23/2020 8:27:00 AM

Great one WW! You are talented :)