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it was a happenstance meeting and perchance my destiny, my fate or maybe it was to be my doom- I had been walking the woods alone and he came to me a handsome stranger, hypnotic . . . how I found myself in this place is uncertain but the walls are damp and musty and draped with moss I hear dripping water echoing from somewhere and I tremble yet, I somehow already love him . . . I brush his dank raven hair from his forehead the tendrils soft as a spiders web oh, surely this is reckless folly . . . slowly his kisses follow the contour of my neck and his whispers are like a drug to my soul my hair flows like a dark rive, and the promise between us are words unsaid . . . I sigh and moan, and my heart flutters and quivers with desire all thoughts of my life drift away all the scars have gone in this surreal love and I have left the ravaged garden that I called living red- a daub of blood trickles from his lips and I kiss the smear away hungrily . . . suddenly, a wafting gust of wind is whirling around us and we hover in a forever eternal embrace . . . _________________________ January 17, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Eternal Embrace Copyright Protected, ID 19-1105-728-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Eight Word Challenge, Bardenesque sponsor, John Hamilton Third Place

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Date: 2/23/2019 10:52:00 PM
Dear Heart, lovely twist at the end to make this romance a little dark, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/21/2019 5:46:00 PM
Well done Constance enjoyed this, another worthy winner!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2019 9:31:00 PM
John, thank you the contest and my placement, appreciate ~

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