Eternal Breath


The air is full of mourning although the years have past,
     My tears still flow like waves upon a rolling vast ocean;
I asked God to take my treasure in his trust for all time,
             My sweet cat now slumbers in the silent dust.

Heavenly angels watch his still soft eternal repose,
     I go there often and just sit, remember him and weep;
A moss draped stone upon the emerald green grass,
               The only symbol of his existence on this earth.

He came to me a stray lost, starving and alone in the world,
    Filled with utter fear and total distrust for all of mankind;
Ever so slowly a loving relationship and an eternal bond,
                Death is the end of life but the love lives on.

I watched his slow breathing all that long, long night,
    And when the sun rose high, he passed through the gate;
In Paradise, I imagine him waiting so quietly for me,
                One day, I will hold him again to my heart.


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November 1, 2013


Poetry/Elegy/Eternal Breath
Copyright Protected, ID 11-516-691-01
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France


For the Standard contest, Eternal Breath, 
sponsor, Gail Angel Doyle, Judged 2013

1st Place
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Sirak Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 8:16 AM
Sad yet full of hope. Congrats on your win.
Hamilton Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 5:28 AM
so poignantly sad yet beautiful congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
Guzzi Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 2:55 PM
I think animals have souls too! :) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 3:56 AM
congratulations on your top spot xx
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance
Jones Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Yes love doesn't stop at death...lovely win...congratulations
Rain Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:39 PM
This is so personal , it really brings me to a time where I said goodbye to early to my Grandson , Love lives on~
A   Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:18 PM
Broken, that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA
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November 26, 2013 at 2:34 PM
- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 10:38 AM
awww, such a heartfelt write, Constance. I must finish writing something for your contest - such an emotional subject. Hope you and the kitties are having a great day x
Mehta Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 9:21 AM
Very touchy and moving , sentimental as well as emotional expressions of deep love, Constance
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 9:21 AM
absolutely THE BEST one I have seen yet, constance. I feel ya in this one. How I missed my Callie cat those first few years after her death. This one is perfect for Elegy contest too.
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