Eternal Best Friend Forever

Eternal Best Friend Forever

Eternal, everlasting, enduring one God without end
Joins me in jubilant jumping up worship jubilee
Spirit sends a scented sunrise of newborn surprises in songs
Miracles made manifest in majestic melodies
Healer when regret harnesses my hobbled heart,
When I lose luminosity in lightless valleys of shame,
Arms opened wide to the abiding, the ageless anthem;
Best friend forever – I feast on flowing fountains of forgiveness
Gracious gift of grace granted to gyrating inspiration
Sweet sanctuary of sleepy serenades ‘neath slumberless stars
Pictures of hearts pirouette in my praise - parading through my pen;
My constant companion, creator, close colleague of comfort
Pensive I ponder your playfulness – knowing my pleas pledge a peace poem;
Savior of my soiled spirit, of sinners and saints – lover of my soul
My thankfulness throbs – tingling thrill - twirling into my thanksgiving

9-20-20
My Relationships with God in Alliteration
Sponsor: Beata Agustin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gasun Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 4:31 AM
Wow! I love your poem so much my dear friend Sam! A very beautiful poem in testimony of your deep faith and relationship with our dear Lord. He is indeed our greatest EBFF. Another fav of mine poem from you. Congratulations on your win and this marvelous write! God bless you always. Sorry for coming late. Still quite sick of cov. God bless you always and your writings, Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a fun/great/blessed day.......................
Kauffman Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Paula! I always love hearing from you. You are a bright spot - a garden of blessings - in my day! Blessings to you!
Gaul Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 12:01 PM
You have many many friends, ten thousand or more.
Kauffman Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 12:53 PM
Thank you my friend. Your message reminds me of the quote from It's a Wonderful Life - "No man is a failure who has friends." I am honored by each and every friendship - definitely a joy and a blessing! Sending you many blessings!
Alex Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 5:46 AM
Greatest friend of all. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 12:50 PM
Amen to that Chris! I had a wonderful time fleshing out this theme. A wake-up call in many respects to become much more aware of God's presence. Sending you many blessings my friend!
Agustin Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 9:46 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, divinely celebrating "International Friendship Day." God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 12:48 PM
Many thanks for this blessing Beata! I an so honored to be on the winners list. International Friendship Day is a wonderful theme and we certainly get to celebrate this special day here on the soup with all of our international friends. Sending you many blessings!
Balasubramanian Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 11:20 AM
Great write. A well deserved top win. Congratulations. Take care. Warm regards, Rama
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 12:37 PM
Hi Rama! It is so wonderful to get your warm and gracious message. Thank you! Hope all is well. Take care. Blessings and hugs to you!
Agustin Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Congrats! My divine nature shouts "Wow" to this poetic testimony of yours, echoing your vibrant and sweet relationship with the Lord. Your concluding line gives reverberating joy to the spirit. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Beata, my thanks to you for sponsoring this contest, and for your placement. What a wonderful opportunity to share in poetry, and alliteration, my relationship with the Lord. Reading all the other winners, I felt like I had experienced a very special time of fellowship. Thank you for that - most grateful. Sending you bunches of blessings and gratitude my friend.
Watt Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 12:34 PM
"Miracles made manifest in majestic melodies", the "ageless anthem" brings me such joy. Your witness to God's goodness indeed "parades through your pen", and brings light and inspiration and joy to this reader. Though saints have been writing praised to the Lord for ages, your words are never stale or cliche. God is good. Congrats for your lovely win with your alliterative alleluias, Sam. Grace and peace ~ John
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Agreed, John - all the time God is good! In writing this I felt like the Holy Spirit, with all of the Spirit's creativity, snuggled up and abided. Thank you for your uplifting words and congratulations. Appreciated more than you know! We are truly blessed to have God as our BFF and to explore that relationship in rhythm and rhyme. October blessings dear friend.
Dutta Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Big Congrats to win First Place. I admire each line of your poem. Blessing.
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 12:22 PM
Thank you Anisha. I am humbled and honored. Sending blessings back to you.
Fowler Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 8:09 AM
You did it Sam :) I felt it would be a win. Congratulations! Linda
Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 12:21 PM
You were right! Thank you for your congratulatory message and your words of support. So grateful. Hope you are doing well!
Fowler Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Just a lovely picture of a best friend forever-God. Well-penned and expressive. Perfect for this contest! Best wishes for a win! Linda
Kauffman Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 9:03 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. I so appreciate your feedback - really is encouraging to me. So grateful for your visit and your lovely words! Hope you are well. Have been enjoying your writes!
Proxenos Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 3:17 AM
Hi Sam, from your title I chose to read it because I just knew that eternal must have meant God, and oh how I agree and believe with you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Kauffman Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 9:51 AM
It is special to have a companion on the journey of faith! Now I know how Paul felt with so many friends in faith all over his world. Amazing experience. Thank you for being one of those very special friends. Sending back hugs and blessings!
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