Eternal

Eternal life beyond
   existence in this realm
       excites the weary soul
           expecting to see Christ
       enveloped by His love
   enthralled by God's glories
every longing fulfilled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 8:02 PM
Wonderful E word and descriptions of Eternity. congrats
Leiser Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 11:26 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Daniel Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 2:03 AM
Excellent!!! Congratulations, Laura:)
Grasso Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations, Laura! Beautifully written! ...Fran
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 4:54 AM
Congrats Laura on the high place win.Such a beautiful word to write upon and such a creative writing. :)
Callus Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 2:38 PM
I'm also enthralled by your lovely Pleiades, Laura! The gift of eternal life is something to look forward to! Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Thank you so much, Paul! God bless you :)
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Many congrats on your number 1 place Laura:-) Hugs jan xx
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Thank you, Jan :)
Andresen Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 12:15 PM
- A well-deserved 1st place, congratulations Laura - I think it's a nice thing to do, to congratulate all one by one - in the contest I participate in - As a little "thank you for the match" regards ..... - Some I have read before and others not - It will always take some time, a long list of winners - But for me it is common courtesy and a pleasure to congratulate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise...you are right, it is a courtesy to thank all the winners, which I plan to do today :)
Singh Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Profoundly penned! Congrats on top placement!
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Thank you, Sushma :)
Chansarkar Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Beautiful words Laura,congrats!
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Thank you, Sara :)
Scars Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Laura, my fave in the contest, Lord's love is eternal...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Thank you, Laura Loo :)
Neumann Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kai
Leiser Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Thank you, Kai :)
Van Der Merwe Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Congratulations Laura - well deserved placement - beautiful write Regards, Mark
Leiser Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Thank you, Mark :)
Krampe Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 10:42 PM
What a beautiful message expressed in such a short form. Congratulations, Laura. Agnes
Singh Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Sublime expression Congrats!
Leiser Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Thank you, Sushma :)
Leiser Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 9:14 PM
Thank you, Joseph :)
May Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 6:27 PM
Congrats on your #1 win Laura..
Leiser Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, Joseph :)
Merryman Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Laura, I love the message of your poem and it's creative presentation. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!
Leiser Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Kim! Eternal is such a wonderful word of life and blessings for all those who know and love God!
Haight Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Such a beautiful Pleiades poem, Laura, with such a wonderful inspirational message. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. I'm surprised I got first place, too :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 5:04 AM
such a divine spell of a write, laura; i feel so blessed!..huggs
Leiser Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Thank you, Nette :)
Raha Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 3:55 AM
Yes I feel eternal now,fully complete and graced.Thanks Laura.
Leiser Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Thank you, Miraj :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Soup mail...
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 2:47 AM
Any time. A really lovely entry Laura. ; )
Leiser Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 10:53 PM
Thanks again, Connie :)
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