Eternal

spirit is eternal, overcoat wears out, all is sublime, mental, never in doubt... Don

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Journey Mcknight

Date: 11/29/2011 8:58:00 AM

mind, body, soul and spirit I believe when 1 is out of order it affects tones whole vessel. always enjoy reading your profound work. Lu

Tony Lane

Date: 11/29/2011 5:04:00 AM

My overcoat is wearing out fast.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/28/2011 11:00:00 PM

Wow Don, what a very deep write you have here! I had to dig deep on this one! "...sublime, mental..." That also mean me, I'm often just that, crazy in my life!! Wonderful work!!

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/28/2011 9:05:00 PM

You are a clever poet my friend Don! Love Lizzie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 8:34:00 PM

Hi DON. it does well with out the insanity coat.. truly Enjoyed;-) Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.