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Etching Goodbye In the Mist

Forgotten flesh behind cold walls, pressing nose to steamed glass-- With weightless memories, your ache hides within a dream like whispers on a scream. --playing moon games. a black widow wraps flies around sound. The empty silence roared like fire, standing in the shadows of surrender... she etched goodbye in the mist.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/6/2015 5:23:00 PM
There are some 'killer' lines in this, Red - very good ... CayCay
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Date: 11/5/2015 1:37:00 PM
Hello Red!! Again, most excellent work too with this Blank Verse write. Your technique is quite wonderful in building out the theme of your write!! A "7" + "FAV" for sure!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 11/5/2015 11:15:00 AM
This is beautiful with its descriptions, I love unique presentation of a scene and this was gorgeous wordplay.
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