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2/1/25 Title chosen: Etched In Stone. Entered in contest, This or That, Vol 30, sponsored by Edward Ibeh.

It’s been almost five years since you’ve been gone It’s hard to believe it’s really been that long Memories of you often haunt my mind As grief can be painful and unkind Today, I stopped for a visit to your grave alone And stared at your name, forever etched in stone My raw emotions are now swirling like a storm Cutting my heart as if tiny glass shards did form I was not prepared for your time to abruptly end You were my biggest support, My Dad and godsend You entered my life when I was only four years old That part was kept a secret, until later when I was told As I sit and hear the birds happily sing on this sad day And admire the fountain that you loved in every way I smile as I realize it’s across your stone in plain view Your peaceful desire to be near the fountain came true I remember past days of walks and talks with you here A special place of memories I hold close and dear Your name is etched in stone and forever in my heart It’s never easy when a beloved parent must depart May you rest in peace Dad as you enjoy the view everyday And I hope and pray to be able to see you again someday

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Date: 2/15/2025 6:39:00 PM
This is so moving. Thank you for sharing the memories! Always, Laura
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/16/2025 4:51:00 AM
Laura, thank you.
Date: 2/10/2025 5:39:00 AM
Superb, moving write, Tania. I'm sorry for your loss. Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/10/2025 8:31:00 AM
Edward thank you and thank you for my placement in your contest.
Date: 2/8/2025 5:24:00 PM
"I smile as I realize it’s across your stone in plain view Your peaceful desire to be near the fountain came true" I love that and it says so much <3
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/9/2025 3:32:00 AM
Paige, thank you.
Date: 2/2/2025 2:38:00 PM
Touching and poignant.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/2/2025 3:46:00 PM
David, thank you.
Date: 2/2/2025 5:38:00 AM
Lovely writing in memory of your dad, Tania:)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/2/2025 6:06:00 AM
Joanna, thank you.
Date: 2/1/2025 7:52:00 PM
My husband died at 40. Dad lived to be 86. This is a great poem Tanya and I like the image. Most of my friends are already gone, and I miss their laughter. I think most of all the good times we had together.. Thanks on those things and be with your dad and via prayer He was a gift to you and I’m sure that you were a gift to him. I know you are gift to meto me. Pangie xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/2/2025 3:11:00 AM
Pangie, thank you.
Date: 2/1/2025 7:11:00 PM
Wonderful poem and powerful. Your father sounds like a special person.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/2/2025 3:11:00 AM
Oliver, thank you.
Date: 2/1/2025 2:58:00 PM
aww Tania such a heartfelt piece which moved me to tears and makes me wish I had had this sort of relationship with my dad. hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/1/2025 3:25:00 PM
Jan, thank you. -hugs
Date: 2/1/2025 2:45:00 PM
Words from your heart and a bit of insight into your past. Lovely writing, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/1/2025 3:26:00 PM
Lin, thank you. - hugs

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