Essentials

"essentials" each time with you my breath is taken away such wonder to see ivory open and free splendor journeys beyond grass reaching golden sands essential are you to my true existence never is there a time I question your being tides flow from the shore touching my soul I inhale inch by inch and mile by mile ancient codes reveal mystery time after time living among the world at sea salt travels from your body of water to the body of me SkyWatcher for the ocean of course

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Emile Pinet

Date: 4/22/2017 3:26:00 PM

The mood here is like getting away on a tropical island and soaking in the atmosphere of ocean and sand. Makes me jealous when I look out my window and see winter's back side mooning me. Great poem. Emile.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/23/2017 6:07:00 AM

Good Morning Emile. My goodness. What a most elegant and gracious not to mention generous review. Your words enhance the entry. Honestly. Thank you ever so much for such a review. Never to I take them lightly. I'm pleased you liked the entry. I love the ocean and all her wonder. Have a wonderful morning and day.

John Michaels

Date: 4/22/2017 5:11:00 AM

Hi Lisa. I'm always in awe of each new ocean-themed poem you share. Just when you think there can't be any new angles - bam!! - you prove that there certainly can!! Well done! Regards, John.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/22/2017 5:29:00 AM

Oh My Goodness. Good Morning John. I so hope I am deserving of your commentary intake and generosity. Truly. You have me smiling. Thank you for that. I truly and sincerely am honored by such a review. I'm pleased you liked the entry. The credit belongs to the ocean herself. I am blessed to know her. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Thank you once again. If the author could give back stars for reviews I would give you a 10 for this one.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/21/2017 10:16:00 AM

of course! Shalom, shalom Sky-Ocean-Wind (and thank you. Could I give this #8?)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/21/2017 1:55:00 PM

PS. Your generosity is overwhelming Anil

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/21/2017 1:53:00 PM

Hello Anil. Shalom back to you thank you. There is no place on earth like the ocean. Thank you for seeing this one and for such a lovely response. Have a wonderful night and I will be turning to your page very soon. Enjoy the weekend.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/21/2017 10:07:00 AM

The ocean gives such peace and so necessary to our existence. Beautiful in it's execution, perfect Acrostic, and the pattern of the verse is plain to imagine the lapping of the ocean ripples on the shore. Thanks for sharing Lisa

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/21/2017 1:51:00 PM

Hello Miss Maria. Yes it does. I so agree. It is I who thanks you for such a marvelous intake and commentary not to mention generosity. Honestly. Thank you very much. I love the ocean now and always. Have a wonderful evening and I will be seeing you on your page.

Darren White

Date: 4/21/2017 2:27:00 AM

What a beautiful love acrostic for an entity I also love with heart and soul. I especially love how you write this in almost one sentence, breathless like waves rolling ashore

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/21/2017 7:33:00 AM

Good Afternoon Darren. Oh my goodness. Coming from you I am beyond honored. Honestly. Thank you Thank you. Your commentary and words are a gift Darren. May the ocean always close and near within our minds to see. May the afternoon treat you well.

White Wolf

Date: 4/20/2017 9:50:00 PM

I do enjoy a great acrostic, and this is no exception! The oceans are truly a wonder of this world! I know Darren White would also love this poem you have crafted! I think he may have been a penguin in a previous life. Haha. Lovely work, Lisa.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/21/2017 7:30:00 AM

Hello White Wolf. Yes, I think he enjoys the ocean also. How funny is that of the penguin. Thank you for mentioning the Acrostic format. From time to time I practice it. I so appreciate your generosity and time White Wolf. Have a wonderful Night. I will see you on your page later on.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/20/2017 6:16:00 PM

I absolutely love the way you talk about the ocean. You breathe it in as if it were as essential as the air we breathe and you embrace and revere it as if it were as fulfillingly enigmatic as the mysteries of the universe:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/21/2017 7:27:00 AM

My goodness. Thank you ever so much. Good Morning Anne-Marie. I could write of the ocean all day long thus thank you for seeing this entry and for your continued generosity. Your feedback is a gift. Have a wonderful day and Amities back to you.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/20/2017 2:01:00 PM

Essential indeed Lisa, what a wondrous place, the sea. Such mystery and secrets held in each wave. Well done...

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/21/2017 7:23:00 AM

Good Morning Charlie. Thank you Thank you. Honestly. In a million entries I could never capture her. Have a wonderful day.

Chris Green

Date: 4/20/2017 12:47:00 PM

So his name is Ocean? :) Just kidding. Another beautiful and serene poem that expresses your love for the sea my friend. May those waves forever caress your heart and soul and their rhythmic motions comfort you.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/20/2017 1:06:00 PM

He He He. Top of the afternoon Chris. Now who's the reviewer. I think you. Thank you as always for your continued support and generosity. Yes, may the ocean live on for one and all. Those waves can caress a soul. Have a wonderful afternoon. I will see you on your page later on.