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Essence of Tranquility

When the gauzy sheen of evening’s touch Drapes my breaths to climb farther than light I enter into oneness with the self… And this hazy mind lays quiet, absent From a jagged pace, releasing calm essence To hold an inner world, steadily tranquil. Capture That Emotion Contest Sponsor : Nina Parmenter 2/12/2019

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Date: 2/18/2019 3:28:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work. Reads to me like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page with encouraging words. Sara
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Date: 2/15/2019 7:32:00 AM
Your exquisite artistry never fails to leave me breathlessly in awe of your talent, Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this poetic beauty. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/14/2019 12:38:00 AM
Beautiful word choices! I am drawn completely into a deep and serene experience. Congratulations!!
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Date: 2/13/2019 10:00:00 PM
Ooooh! 'Gauzy sheen' is now a silver sheen! Congrats on your trophy finish, nette! ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:53:00 PM
wow, amazing, Nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:53:00 PM
should be in the mindfulness contest too
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Date: 2/13/2019 4:35:00 PM
Ah...your words are oh so tranquil! Congrats on your well deserved win, Nette! :)
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Date: 2/13/2019 4:05:00 PM
Congrats, nette. Congrats on your top win. Well penned.
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Date: 2/13/2019 3:56:00 PM
many congrats on your win Nette, very beautifully penned :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/13/2019 2:22:00 PM
ahhhh, beautiful
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:57:00 AM
The winner im sure.
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Date: 2/12/2019 8:33:00 PM
Such a magnificent verse, my friend.. Amazingly peaceful!! Had taken me to a tranquil place.. A fav for me!! Many blessings..
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Date: 2/12/2019 7:35:00 PM
Browsing through and found this impeccable poem lightening my day and helping me slumber away, " to hold an inner world ."
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