Notes About The Poem

For Sotto Poet's Any Theme Any Form Poetry contest

Rumi has been a great inspiration to my poetry and life.  This poem was written based on quotes and poems by Rumi.

Through illness and death of loved ones, his words have helped soothe the pain.

Essence of my Poetry

How do I praise your influence, oh Rumi?
For you are the essence of my poetry. 
Poet's quote.

I was lost in mournful melodies of birds, until death brought me back to life through your words. My sleeping spirit now roams in your garden's blooms, spinning from nothingness against toxic fumes. Polishing of my heart left me in a trance, through cleansing of pain, I learned how to dance. I had not drank wine, but walked like a drunkard, dizziness helped to forget where I wandered. You taught; how the beloved lives in my heart. To let go of those who wanted to depart. To stop chasing stories and myths from the past. To break free from the prisons our minds can cast. When you change with wisdom, your soul recovers, ascends to the sky in a world of lovers. Now I have wings and no longer crawl through life, never raise my words to cause another strife. Ignore those who remind of disease and death. That love is the bridge between my sweetheart's breath. I closed my eyes, fell in love and remain there. Life is a guest house, so I dwell without care.
The poem is based on Rumi quotes and poems. Mathnawi or Masnavi is a Persian a type of poetry, originating from the Arabic word Mathnawi, written in rhyming units and which follow a pattern of eleven or sporadically ten syllables without any length limits. This one is eleven syllables per line.
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Ricci Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Silent Silent. I can not comment on the works and execution of Rumi. I can most certainly comment on the entry and execution by you before us "Essence of my Poetry" which in my eyes and ears is poetic in vintage and true fashion with all poetic elements attached. Truly. Your writing is so smooth and beautiful. Your words touch any reader. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. Peace and Blessings always. (smile) This is poetry.
Seeker Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 12:35 AM
Beautiful! “I closed my eyes, fell in love and remain there” warmest congratulations on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! "Essence of my Poetry" is a wonderful write/quote. When I grow up, I hope can write like you.... Have a wonderful day with your win...............
Elliott Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 2:06 PM
A poem full of artistry about the pain and sorrows of bereavement. You are one of the most talented poets anywhere, Silent One. Congratulations on your deserved placement. Warmest Yuletide greetings. ~
One Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 2:09 PM
I'm not sure I am talented, just am amateur...thank you for your kind words
Poet Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Dear Silent One, this is an exquisite poetic portrayal of the worlds filled with desolate dominion and envious devotion. Indeed, existence itself is the bridge. There is a throbbing beat. Congratulations on your first-place contest win.
One Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Thank you for appreciating my efforts...its nice someone does. This one is part of my soul..
George Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 6:38 AM
"I had not drank wine but walked like a drunkard." "Ignore those who remind of disease and death." This should be my best line and it's a very creative diss. I love it. The poem entirely evokes life and it's worries and also the reality and joy in sailing through it.
George Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 9:36 PM
From the beginning I have watched your penchant for the great poet Rumi. But it is indeed surprising to know that his verses have influenced you so deep and have given you a new lease of life and revived the lover in you . " You taught; how the beloved lives in my heart. To let go of those who wanted to depart." What a beautiful transformation! Into my FAVE.
Ball Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:26 PM
A poem of release and healing. Great stuff. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Rolland Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:48 PM
My sister bought me a Rumi book a long time ago, it is fascinating how you use his verses, to convey wisdom and light, really a fabulous poem, thanks SI
Maverick Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 1:01 PM
Good one Si.' It revolves round the place where We laugh or cry, once broken stay focused And hold your course, its only once thereafter you'll withstand all force.'
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Essence of your poetry shines in this write--Rumi would be proud! Well done in this difficult to execute form, SO.
Gentile Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:58 AM
Silent one, throughout but most especially the very last line resonates with me deeply! Life is indeed a guest house! If one can really let that sink in, what a difference is made! A very thoughtful poem penned here! Happy Tuesday!
Delaney Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:46 AM
A beautiful reminder to let go of sorrow and find the joy within. Enjoyed reading this one. SuZ
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 4:35 AM
Love this, S.O. Thanks also, for introducing us to this form of poetry. Unique... as is your write. So many great lines :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 3:49 AM
Wonderful poetic depiction of the world's of dispossessed sadness and possessive love. Truly, the bridge is life. The rhythm is pulsating.
Meadows Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 2:56 AM
This is beautiful. Well written.
Empress Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 2:32 AM
Ah your love for rumi is so evident here and so precious how you express love for rumi through a tribute like this. Ive never tried mathnavi or masnavi i know auraofrhymes and you love doing this form, and you especially do it so well! These are wise words, to fine light within and let go of things that arent welcome or should not be entertained in life. Love lives within, can be about self love too but also can be interpreted as love for a beloved, thats the beauty of your poetic words. I dont
Empress Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 2:34 AM
Have such an inspiration and ive never really read rumis work, but from this and your poetry i can tell must be a brilliant poet .. i love the rhymes here. And although it has a syllable restriction the way your lines flow is just beautiful! Another fave for me
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