Essence of Betrayal

Betrayal, like the coldest wind that
turns to ice in your veins 
That cannot be liquefied by 
apologetic words or obvious guilt 
It only seems to melt when we accept
that people will always do what they want 
But shards always remain and the 
shock still lingers in the memory 
Because you never saw it coming 
But now you watch for it and 
although the ice has melted, the
coldness reminds you to expect it...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Alexander Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 6:56 PM
This spoke to me, I went through betrayal recently and it happened during the ice storm ironically, left me with no passion/romance, just ashes. Your write is beautifully written and speaks the truth. I want to extend my gratitude for you sharing this. This is a favorite of mine now ;) - Mike
Muldoon Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 7:21 PM
I am both glad and sorry that you can relate to this poem! Its tough to let go of the betrayed feeling but it is worse to hold on, I hope you find your way to make it melt, thanks for your lovely comment! :)
Karim Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 11:01 AM
I love your poem. It's really good. You never see someone stab you in the back but like everything else in life you live and you learn...
Muldoon Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 7:19 PM
thanks Ayesha :) nd you are right!
Phillips Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:53 AM
"although the ice has melted, the coldness reminds you to expect it..." Nice figure of speech resonates in this piece.
Muldoon Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 8:15 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting on this poem :)
Dahlusion Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 7:50 AM
After reading this, I have icicles forming all over my body: " the coldness reminds you to expect it..." —excellent imagery and shards of regret. Bravo, Poet!
Muldoon Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 8:14 AM
Thank you very much for your feedback, it means a lot to me! And I am glad you enjoyed this poem
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