Essence

Something sinister stalks the streets
Searching the smells at sunset
Slipping unseen, slinking in shadows
Seeking that special sweet snack

She sees with rose tinted glasses
It's secretly stolen her senses
Slowly the serpent approaches
Since now it somehow seems safe

It's sulphurous stench overcomes her
She slumps at once on the stones
It's sillibant stutter, stalling her speech
Stealing her silent screams

Sated at last it slides to the sewers
Entrails slurping inside
It slips it's tentacles into the slime
And settles to sleep of it's feast








Joint 3rd place in John Freeman's 'Most Awesome Paranormal Experience' contest
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Merryman Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 12:25 PM
This is fantastic, Nick. The alliteration makes the story more intense. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 9:20 PM
congrats Nick on an exciting win for this electrifying write luv.. most impressive lines of creative genius ..
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:57 AM
Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "3rd place wins Only" contest Nick. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:11 AM
NICK,,.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 9:36 PM
Sounds like Alien! methinks it is not a true experience, but congrats on your cool win! LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Nick, thank your for supporting my contest with your poem. Congrtulations, Agape, Moses
Haick Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 5:49 PM
My congratulations on your win in the contest, Nick! Great job! Peace, Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Loved the reference to rose-tinted glasses stealing the woman's senses, Nick. Great poem! Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 7:30 AM
Congrats Nick on your winning poem in Moses contest.. a wonderful write and well deserved win ..enjoy your special victory .. luv.. "Sweetheart" ..Linda-Marie..
Miles Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 5:55 AM
I love alliteration. And S is the perfect letter to choose for a serpent poem. The whole poem hisses. Nice read. Matt.
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 3:59 AM
This is kinda scary and I can't decide...Is it metaphoric? Is it just a horror write? Questions??? Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Strand Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 12:43 AM
Superb selection Nick.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
Freeman Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 12:01 PM
This capture of the serpent stealing the senses is quite good Nick. Elaborate, elaborate. Smile. Sincerely, Moses
Echo Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 7:53 AM
This is an amazing write... I'm at a loss for words. =) -Echo
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Nick, The alliteration in this poem is amazing... It reads smoothly and you have definitely captured the essence of something sinister throughout the write... creepy/scary... in the night...Oooooo. Smiles, Dane Ann
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