Escape For a Night -Explicit-

Her body shook from the pleasure
 A wide eyed stupid stare
I was breathing harder
Hand’s bruised her wrists 
Fingers tore out her hair
I held her down 
 everything I had
She wouldn’t escape- 
what was coming
her insides all mine
the last thrust 
came so hard
Her head slammed against the door 
I emptied myself into her
Squeezed out every drop
I collapsed next to her
Kissed her gently
We talked
All night
Laughing madly together
Talking about our lives
 her young confused eyes 
filled with a lustful bliss
she talked to me so deep
Like we had done every night for weeks
Only then with our clothes on
about rape and abuse
wanting a place to call home
a giant house, a husband
children she would never have
thanks to a sadist with a flashlight 
trying to make it day by day
she started to cry
I dried her eyes
Beneath her make up
Was a childish face
Covered in bruises 
She reminded me that when she left
She would do this for other men
Only they would give her money
Not just their time
And she would have to pretend
She thanked me for being a friend
 Said she shouldn’t have done this
She whispered to herself
It’s bad for business
She wanted to feel what it was like
To be normal for one night
With a boy who was nice
as she headed toward the door
she thanked me for being nice
caring about her
being a friend 
not judging  and not
treating her like a whore 
I found a friend I understood
An equal
To everyone else she was a whore
I would have kissed her harder
If I’d known I’d never see her again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/7/2014 10:00:00 AM
Wow, I could feel the intensity!
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Date: 9/7/2014 10:14:00 PM
Bring me more of yours! If it doesn't leave someone questioning their morality or force them into a cold shower its not worth writing. Also It's a way for me to push a whole lot of skeletons out of my closet ;)
Date: 9/3/2014 9:16:00 AM
A very sad poem... It is not easy to write about such things. I could feel her pain reading your words.
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