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Erupting Emotions

@ @@@ @@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@ &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& @@@@@@@@ @@&&& &&&&&&&&&& &&& &&&&&&&&& #### && &&&&&&& ~~~ Encompassed by her esoteric eruptive emotions &&&&& Within her consternation she stood a fragile flower @@@ (. .) Gathering predilection amidst deluging tears of oceans &&&&& A friend to apathy enslaved by love as demons devour &&&&& <----> In reverence of her courageous heart with dragons fire &&&&&& And condemnation of her sacrificial silent screaming dire @@@@@@ Upon her unearthliness she emancipates to empower. &&&&&&&&&& @@@@@@ @@@@@@@ @@@@ ******** @@@@@@ @@@@@ @@@@@@@ @@@ @@@@@@@@ @@@ @@@@@@@@ &&& *** * ** ** * * * * *** This poem is dedicated to Brenda Chiri...for her enduring emotions...in reference to her post 'My Body Tells A Story'. Nov.02.2018 7 Lines, 7 Words: Rhyme Sponsored by: Lu Loo N/A for contest

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/5/2019 4:33:00 PM

Bro bro I had to find this poem once more! You brought tears to my eyes once more with this! I am honored to have you in my extended family but my truly thoughtful brother! I know she. I left ps my comments are gone do I had to come back and thank you once more!;)

Susan Rigo

Date: 11/17/2018 6:21:00 PM

Beautiful!

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/27/2018 7:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan...my new found friend...love & light...^WW^

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/6/2018 3:52:00 PM

The Winged Warrior, triumphs again, amazing, rendition, and the sketch superb..

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/6/2018 7:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Harry...wouldn't be the same without you my friend...love & light...^WW^

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2018 10:21:00 AM

Great picture, better poem; well done. I love this, "she emancipates to empower"; best of luck in the contest.

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/6/2018 7:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, M.L.~your presence is greatly appreciated, my friend...love & light...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/5/2018 7:45:00 PM

Very cool!

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/6/2018 7:26:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Kimmy...love & light my friend...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/5/2018 6:38:00 PM

What a compassionate human being you are WW! The world needs more people like you who reach out to others with time and talent to let them know you care and are there for them. This is a work of art straight from the heart! A fave my friend! : ) xxoo

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/6/2018 7:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Connie...as the universe needs more like you, my friend... let's talk to a cloning specialist lol...love & replicas...^WW^...{*_J*}

Charles Messina

Date: 11/4/2018 10:08:00 PM

Very creative and an absolutely brilliant write WW, once again your talent has sparked through your wings dear brother. Excellent! ~Charlieku (lol)

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/5/2018 8:01:00 AM

Thank you my poetic brother'in...would not be the same without our Charlieku...love & light...^WW^

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/3/2018 8:14:00 PM

You have expressed emotions of the heart, the hurt and the pain- in a tender and thoughtful way. As always, your creativity reaches beyond the sky. You have a wonderful heart my dear friend. So sad when someone is treated like this. Brenda has many friends here to support her. You being one of them. Love and tenderness. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/4/2018 6:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, Brandy...your words bring peace, calm and beauty within the poetic realms... you are eternal, poetically speaking...love & light...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2018 6:48:00 PM

gosh, you made it with your very own illustration SO creative. Wish I could think up stuff like that!!! Awesome

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:32:00 PM

Thank you, dear Andrea...you can also my friend...you've got to ask the Angels first...love & light...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/2/2018 6:44:00 PM

Oh my wicked bro bro, your tender heart and amazing artistry moves me to beyond mere words. An exquisite emotional work of art inspired by our inspiring twisty sissy, Brenda A.K.A. Dragon Fire. The visual is captivating and the poetry is breathtaking.. a stunning tribute to our dear sis. Beautiful in every way and a FAV! Best wishes for a win my wonderful bro bro.. ~love and hugs, Illuminatra the Sane.. :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:30:00 PM

Dear Illuminatra...tears were shed today by our Sis Dragon Fire...I always wanted to make the girls cry...but not in this manner...I hope nothing of this nature has happened to you...so let us sponge them up with our hearts and show her much love...and thank you dear sib...bro bro

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/2/2018 6:31:00 PM

Awesome writing and artistic skill combine to make this a fave! And I can see Brenda was impressed as well. Especially enjoyed the line "...she emancipates to empower." Only through such freedom are people allowed to reach their full potentials. Well done, WW ! Hugs, Carolyn

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carolyn...your presence is greatly appreciated...you have great wisdom thru- love & light...^WW^

Lin Lane

Date: 11/2/2018 5:40:00 PM

It's difficult to bear abuse of any kind from a loved one, but for those of us who've felt its sting and found the courage to survive, we emerge with a measure of strength we didn't think possible. How kind of you to gift Brenda with your artistic skills.

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:20:00 PM

Thank you Lady Lin...Laney for short lol...you my friend are one of my mentors...thank you for being you...love & light...^WW^

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/2/2018 2:53:00 PM

I am stunned! There are no words, and I am pretty sure Brenda is too. Wow!

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:15:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Caren...you are a very loving soul...an ambassador from heaven...love & light...^WW^

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/2/2018 2:35:00 PM

Wow , I'm so impressed by you right now, winning wishes ,

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:12:00 PM

I'm always impressed by you my friend...still like that name...love & light...^^WW^

John Gondolf

Date: 11/2/2018 12:41:00 PM

WW, this is truly a wonderful tribute to our dear friend, so beautifully written and presented. John

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, John...when a fellow poet hurts we respond...love & light...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/2/2018 11:47:00 AM

Thunderous verse for overpowering emotions dear WW! Excellent Topic!

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maestro Demetrios...compliments from you, are poetic in nature...love & light...^WW^

Chris Green

Date: 11/2/2018 11:25:00 AM

Wow, that was so cool my friend. I love the art and the poem and the dedication. Your use of the required words was fantastic. Best of luck in the contest

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 10:01:00 PM

Thank you, Chris...I had to do this for our dear friend...she endured so much over the years...love & light...^WW

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 11/2/2018 10:07:00 AM

You are so talented in every way....

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 9:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Sunlite...your presence to me is talented and your poetry my friend...love & light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/2/2018 9:08:00 AM

You are an artist in mind and a highly talented poet in heart and a beautiful soul that never ceases to amaze an avid reader! Great work Winged Warrior! I do appreciate and fave. My deepest regards.

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 9:57:00 PM

My dear poetic sister, thank you so much...these are gifts from the Divine...transcending thru Angels...love & light...^WW^

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/2/2018 9:01:00 AM

Simply amazing..wonderful, creative. Kudos for your talents, WW.

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 9:56:00 PM

Thank you, dear Vijay...love & light my friend...^WW^

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/2/2018 8:39:00 AM

You are Art my friend...Creativity bubbling over...All the best WW

Winged Warrior
Date: 11/2/2018 9:56:00 PM

Thank you Art-uro...your love bubbles over my friend...love & light...^WW^