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Erosion 1

yesterday's trickle down today's precipitation tomorrow's cascade Inspired by Raul's photo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/12/2009 6:49:00 AM
Hi Brian, Very deep (Pardon the pun). An ekphrasis as only you can write. Sensational, Brian. Lainie. And thank you so very much for your on-going challenges and very kind comments.
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Date: 10/9/2009 11:13:00 AM
Very descriptive of the picture. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/9/2009 7:54:00 AM
Brian, Tomorrow's cascade built on a billion yesterdays. What a lovely reminder earth gives. Your words are beautiful. Thanks for your comments as well. Sincerely, Dane
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Date: 10/9/2009 4:24:00 AM
love it!!
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Date: 10/8/2009 9:30:00 AM
I love rain...... Natures shower......Nice write Brian.....:JP]
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Date: 10/8/2009 8:23:00 AM
Oh...I like this one too!! :)
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Date: 10/8/2009 8:16:00 AM
Another lovely, inspired piece, Brian! The cycle continues. Love, Robin
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Date: 10/8/2009 7:27:00 AM
On and on and......Love Light Truth Patricia
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