Erosion 1

yesterday's trickle down

today's precipitation

tomorrow's cascade

Inspired by Raul's photo

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Elaine George

Date: 10/12/2009 6:49:00 AM

Hi Brian, Very deep (Pardon the pun). An ekphrasis as only you can write. Sensational, Brian. Lainie. And thank you so very much for your on-going challenges and very kind comments.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2009 11:13:00 AM

Very descriptive of the picture. Keep writing. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/9/2009 7:54:00 AM

Brian, Tomorrow's cascade built on a billion yesterdays. What a lovely reminder earth gives. Your words are beautiful. Thanks for your comments as well. Sincerely, Dane