Erosion 1

yesterday's trickle down

today's precipitation

tomorrow's cascade

Inspired by Raul's photo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 6:49 AM
Hi Brian, Very deep (Pardon the pun). An ekphrasis as only you can write. Sensational, Brian. Lainie. And thank you so very much for your on-going challenges and very kind comments.
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Very descriptive of the picture. Keep writing. Sara
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 7:54 AM
Brian, Tomorrow's cascade built on a billion yesterdays. What a lovely reminder earth gives. Your words are beautiful. Thanks for your comments as well. Sincerely, Dane
Culverhouse Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 4:24 AM
love it!!
Pickett Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 9:30 AM
I love rain...... Natures shower......Nice write Brian.....:JP]
Richards Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Oh...I like this one too!! :)
Gass Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 8:16 AM
Another lovely, inspired piece, Brian! The cycle continues. Love, Robin
Sheart Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 7:27 AM
On and on and......Love Light Truth Patricia
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