Erie

I owe so much to you 
When you pulled at me,
Tugged me from my toiling, 
When I was crouched low,
In the kitchen, blurry choke of tears 
I saw the outline of your peninsula 
Etched in florescent blue in my mind
A little red star on a map 
Such a hard drive (for me and the Ford) 
But I, swept into the arms of that gentle house, 
Saw a clearing in the nettles, one that I could pass through
And those turned to violets that kissed me as I was waking up 
And going to bed, listening to the healing black wind 
Through the many cracked windows 
Presque Isle with her flags and sea glass 
The promise of going to Canada 
Turning my head to look at the lake, that dark lake
Itself enigmatic- a sea but not a sea 
I think about that, brush the snowy sand from my palms 
Yes, in a way,
That could be me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Austin Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 10:16 AM
I've been to Presge. Beautiful place, beautiful poem. Love, daver
Austin Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Sorry - Presque.
Devnath  Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 2:17 PM
Nice experience beautifully penned. Loved always, bl
Martin Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Thank you!
Delaney Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 11:05 AM
Such a beautiful tribute to a beloved place. This goes on my favs to read over. You are so talented. SuZ
Martin Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:11 PM
Thank you so much, Suzanne! That means a lot to me. I've been AWOL for a bit, going to check your poetry out now :) !
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 12:10 AM
I had been many times on the Erie. It brings back some nice memories
Martin Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:11 PM
I was just there actually a few months ago. My home away from home. :)
Anglesey Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 3:45 PM
I felt the serenity of this unique experience of being at Lake Erie. Some settings are so spiritually attached to our memory that when we think of it we feel as though we are right there in that moment again. Excellent writing :)
Martin Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:10 PM
That place will always be a home for me. The breeze is so relaxing.. thank you so much
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 2:49 PM
I wondered at the imagery of this and how you related your emotions to lake erie. that's what it was , right? Not sure I totally understood your poem, but I got the feeling from it that you long to be with someone that gives you good memories. It 's a beautiful and deep poem!!
Adams Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 9:07 AM
love this one...it pulls you in and takes you along a journey....great images in this beautiful piece!
Hamilton Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 5:11 AM
Jeremy a lovely ode that tells a beautiful story Shadow x smile
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 4:33 AM
- A beautiful way to tell a small part of a life ..... (I had to read it .... and read it again .... and again ..) - Thanks. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Martin Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:09 PM
I know I'm slightly late on this reply, but I went AWOL for a bit. Thank you so much!! You always inspire me.
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