Eric Is Going To Iraq

Linda is making her urgent plea today
to all who read her desperate message;
she asks for comforting words and prayers
for her son Eric, who is going to Iraq, whose
pride and courage reflects a young age.


Go, Eric from your loved Motherland
and bring along the Star-Spangled flag...
to remind you of a mission of liberty,
to open the eyes of those deceived by tyranny;
go, Eric and bring along God's mercy. 


Saying goodbye may be too hard,
so let tears flow to release much pain,
and your sacrifice is another child's gain...
an American soldier being there to transform ugliness into beauty,
to let him, or her see how a kind and loving stranger can change their destiny.


Go, Eric and make America proud with your manly ego,
and tell your mom that another unforgettable hero
will be added to the long list of those who planted their seed;  
and on his return his family and friends will hug him
and congratulate him for his bravery and grit.


God's protection is invoked by a well-wisher and a caring person like me...
to bring you home in the shortest time, safe and sound;
and may the desert nights help you find that special friend in the stars,
and may the long days resemble the radiant sun's face, and should
you break down and cry: don't let despair be your demise.


Embrace your mother, and kiss her tenderly,
show her how strong and confident you are...
to go overseas and engage in a war still fought with atrocity;
look afar...visualize the moments of your glory:
when you'll land on your adored and beloved shore.  


Inspired by Linda-Marie Bariana's Blog


Copyright 2010 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 18, 2010 at 11:03 PM
Dear Andrew, A Beautiful Tribute to ERIC I'm sure he has read this before his deployment in March I just wrote a Senryu about Vets I would put ERIC # 1 Linda-Marie My "SweetHeart" asked me to read this POEM I am glad I did I like YOUR Contests YOU should do one on "End LINE Word" Form See Dane-Ann"s Blog or Soup Mail Her Thank-YOU ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
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February 14, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Beautiful tribute to a wonderful.Lady's son and if Eric have the heart as his mother's im sure He will be the finest soldier..Wonderful to think of others Andrew..To Eric i say,dont be a Hero,just be home soon and safe:)Charma
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February 9, 2010 at 6:03 AM
hot poem!! great tribute to a soldier!! The proud and valiante, hope they are fighting in God's strength!! Many prayers!
Byrne Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Let's hope he comes back happy!
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February 5, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Beautiful and inspiring words to Eric and his proud and loving mother, Andrew! - Tim
White Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Wonderful & moving. ***Danielle***
Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 10:36 AM
Wonderful write about a precious son going to serve his country and freedom. This piece comes from a warm heart, and a gentleman >> James
K. Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 12:49 AM
To Andrew: what a wonderful tribute to a brave son and loving mother--your words would serve as such an inspiration! To Eric: Just be comforted that there are many souls, though you may not not know them who will be praying for your strength and safe return to your mom and your loved ones--I salute you--stay brave and keep the faith alive! To Linda-Marie: my prayers and thoughts are with you and your son :) I applaud you as well for being such a strong mom :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 9:52 PM
This was incredibly sweet of you, to write this for LInda, who is going to miss Eric so much. I enjoyed the read, Andrew. Luv, Andrea
Owens Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 8:34 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to Linda-Marie's son...Thanks for sharing...Marty
Guzzi Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 6:26 PM
soft smile..such a nice thing to do Andrew! God bless the child. Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 6:06 PM
An awesome tribute to Linda's son Andrew. Thanks Linda for a brave son. I will pray for your son's safe return. Faith in God(Love) will keep him safe. Sincerely, Moses
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February 3, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Andrew Crisci ~It doesn't surprise me at all to read your strong words of praise and encouragement to this young man. I wish Eric all the best in his mission to make a change . Keep strong and hold on to Gods love! Nice tribute to a friends child Andrew! Love Laura :0)
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February 3, 2010 at 3:50 PM
Your poem speaks on behalf of the feelings of many Soupers who are hoping Eric returns safely, Andrew. Thank you for comforting Linda-Marie with this amazing poem! Love, Carolyn
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February 3, 2010 at 2:00 PM
I will treasure this poem forever Andrew .. your inspiration truly comes from above and such generosity to my son is overwhelming to this Mother...I intend to print this out and give it to Eric in a frame to put in his quarters as a reminder of a loving soul who took time to express words of encouragement and love... also going to make a framed one for me to keep always before my eyes to remember my dear son and u for this honor and tribute.. a treasured gift! luv and thankxxx.. Linda-Marie
Palli Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 10:28 AM
How heart wrenching to have a loved one depart for war
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