Eranthis-Free Verse

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One of two poems Eranthis-Free Verse and Eranthis-Etheree written at the same time about the same subject but in different form.

Beautiful little buttercup glistening in the morning sun.
Fragile are you, so small, so delicate.
So eager to greet the new spring 
and break free from your wintry prison,
your glorious yellow cheeks always smiling at the world.

The gentle breeze plays melodies,
peeking through the shadows.
Dancing among the fallen leaves, 
your flamboyant show belies your quiet nature.

Too soon your beauty will fade but tenderness will remain.
Once more your leaves will curl 
and sleep will come with troubled dreams

as your leaves unfold and your petals drop.
The changing seasons take their toll.

Often feeling tread upon, life seems so heavy.


07/26/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/16/2015 1:57:00 AM
Wonderful write James! Congrats on big win!
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James Inman
Date: 9/16/2015 10:21:00 AM
Nice of you to drop by, thank you, Dr. Sharma.
Date: 9/15/2015 2:17:00 PM
James, nice win. SKAT
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James Inman
Date: 9/16/2015 10:20:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 9/14/2015 6:20:00 PM
I enjoyed this...thank you for sharing !!! :)
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James Inman
Date: 9/16/2015 10:19:00 AM
Thank you read reading it, Casarah.
Date: 7/26/2015 9:42:00 PM
Nice to enjoy your words this evening. All life mirrors each other! Light & Love
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James Inman
Date: 7/26/2015 11:27:00 PM
Debbie, thank you so much for the visit. I have recently read your poem Maudlin Mary, among others, and I am in awe. My poems seem so simple but I'm glad you enjoyed this one. rjijr
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