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Equipped

Shane Blaine walked with a swagger and was viewed as a bragger. Ladies liked him lots but kept secret their thoughts. Awed by his eight-inch dagger.

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/12/2016 1:22:00 AM

G'day Paul ... a real good play on words. Thanks for the chuckle - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 4/16/2016 5:43:00 AM

Thank you, Lindsay. Your comments never fail to hit the mark. I'm glad the poem gave you a chuckle (I was chuckling as I wrote it).

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/11/2016 2:49:00 AM

This is one of the best Limericks I have encountered Paul. You are a genius at writing these. # 7

Paul Schneiter
Date: 4/11/2016 7:37:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. Your support comes as a welcome relief. The poem got such a poor response (Jan being the exception), I thought I had crossed the "good taste" line. Your kind comment leads me to conclude otherwise. hugs x x x

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2016 7:21:00 AM

I nearly spurted my cup of tea over the laptop then - this is hilarious my friend:-) hugs Jan xx7

Paul Schneiter
Date: 4/5/2016 7:37:00 AM

Thank you, Jan, my ever-faithful friend and poetry idol. I guess it's OK to be naughty once in awhile.