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Equipped

Shane Blaine walked with a swagger
and was viewed as a bragger.
Ladies liked him lots
but kept secret their thoughts.
Awed by his eight-inch dagger.

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Lindsay Laurie

April 12, 2016 at 1:22 AM

G'day Paul ... a real good play on words. Thanks for the chuckle - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter

April 16, 2016 at 5:43 AM

Thank you, Lindsay. Your comments never fail to hit the mark. I'm glad the poem gave you a chuckle (I was chuckling as I wrote it).

Connie Marcum Wong

April 11, 2016 at 2:49 AM

This is one of the best Limericks I have encountered Paul. You are a genius at writing these. # 7

Paul Schneiter

April 11, 2016 at 7:37 AM

Thank you, Connie. Your support comes as a welcome relief. The poem got such a poor response (Jan being the exception), I thought I had crossed the "good taste" line. Your kind comment leads me to conclude otherwise. hugs x x x