Epithet: Rain Girl

Here, beneath the sky of my mind,
in the swaying hammock of my heart, 
strung between tall palms of loss and love -
lies a child's form furled , asleep.
RainGirl is this little one's name,
her father called her this -
" She who was born with the rain,"
born to bring liquid life again
She who should have brought bliss
to dry and desolate plain
bleached by drought's hot kiss...
Instead, she sleeps now, folded away,
peaceful as an unborn chick -
life protected, yet space restricted
in her hard shelled hide.
Conceived through loss,
she now lives, survives, 
because her brothers died.
As if they stepped aside.
Brief pure lives roughly shortened
by life's relentless tide
of comings and goings, never ceasing -
Life's, and Death's continual pacings...

Now, she-child must quietly sway...
Allow a woman to take her place -
who longs to laugh with female grace...
So sleep, curled child, beneath blue skies,
Sleep those bitter hours away...

Arise Woman! Get up, stand tall, stand strong!
The desert plain is ablaze with flowers.


 
Posted 28/09/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/11/2024 12:23:00 PM
Incredible poem. I particularly love the lines " She who was born with the rain," born to bring liquid life again She who should have brought bliss to dry and desolate plain bleached by drought's hot kiss...". Amazing writing, Aqua.
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Aqua Marine
Date: 2/11/2024 12:42:00 PM
I really appreciate your very welcome visit and comment, Shane-lovely of you to let me know which lines touched you... Self awareness is the healing journey I've been on for a while... Sometimes it's a Rollercoaster ride, but worthwhile! It's given me insight into, and fellow feeling... Love your neighbor as yourself... :)
Date: 12/27/2023 3:58:00 AM
Dancing in the Rain Jumping in Puddles Skies don't cry in pain Each dry place on earth A rainbow comes to berth.
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Date: 11/30/2019 4:03:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem, Aqua, and the end part is truly inspiring and uplifting! I am surprised that so far no one has stopped to comment!! ~ Best regards // paul
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Aqua Marine
Date: 12/1/2019 12:37:00 AM
Thank you, Paul, for commenting on a poem, close to my heart! Maybe some of my poems are too" personal" for some, but I do write from the heart! I was given an African Language name by my father, who grew up with Sesotho children on a farm in the FreeState, SA. Born after a long drought, it rained for 9 days from the day I was born. Life has its complications - we need to rise above the past. Life is precious! Thank you for your visit and comment! Warm regards. Aqua M
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