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Epigram 4

. Her slip was transparent

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 12/28/2010 3:21:00 PM

This one has the glancing wit of the best epigrams. Happy New Year to you from Gerard.

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 11:40:00 PM

Ty dear poet, 11yearz later....much love, james

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/17/2010 9:52:00 AM

This says so much,humuros and clever :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/17/2010 9:22:00 AM

Only those who were paying attention would catch this, James! LOL Love, Audrey

James Peranteau
Date: 6/1/2021 10:59:00 PM

*winks....much love, james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2010 4:49:00 PM

Interesting ..Could be interpertated several ways..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/16/2010 12:08:00 PM

You're cracking me up, James. You have this one listed as an "epitaph," so if this is on someone's tombstone it takes on a whole new meaning. VERY clever! Nice work on your epigram series! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/16/2010 8:18:00 AM

You should close your eyes then James ;) thanks for the smiles.. Love Wilma

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/16/2010 6:42:00 AM

sounds naughty.... gave me a smile!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/15/2010 7:23:00 PM

and so possibilities James..haha.. enjoyed with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/15/2010 8:52:00 AM

Nice thought with good images, James

Daver Austin

Date: 12/15/2010 7:16:00 AM

I'm all eyes. Old Dave

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/15/2010 3:17:00 AM

uh oh!! what an observant eye, james... love this one! nette