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Epi-Desperate

You called me by his name last night... I answered 11/29/19 For the: Hit Me With Your Epi-Pen Poetry Contest Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/30/2019 8:23:00 PM

Whoa! Bullseye, Archer! ~ gw

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thanks my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/30/2019 2:42:00 AM

oops ; good one

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2019 8:20:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/29/2019 7:04:00 PM

So great! Surely desperate. Perhaps she calls all (oh no) her lovers the same.

Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2019 8:20:00 AM

Perhaps...you never know. : ) Thanks Kim

Becca Teagan

Date: 11/29/2019 4:11:00 PM

lol This is awesome, powerful, and direct. Well done!

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 4:23:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend.

Ann Foster

Date: 11/29/2019 2:33:00 PM

Wow...... wow.... the heart can betray... but yet, dreams are not truth, just unbound thoughts let loose... when they should be, pinned and sewn into place. Your pen is sharp... your emotions, deep... Ann

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 2:37:00 PM

Thank you so very much Ann. I am glad you liked this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2019 1:38:00 PM

oh wow!! I like this A LOT

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 2:03:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/29/2019 12:44:00 PM

The poem gives the shock of hearing it. and then the mystery, of what you did answer!? Great one Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 12:56:00 PM

Thanks Heidi. Hopefully it shocks Maureen when it comes time to judge the contest. : )

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/29/2019 11:47:00 AM

Ouch and wow... this is powerful my friend, so few words yet delivers a punch! I am sure this one will be on the win list! Excellent penning Chris... hugs :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/29/2019 11:56:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandy. Just a little humor on a rainy Friday. I appreciate you my friend.