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Our winter takes a stand to come each year: beyond the spring, and after summer days, accepts the brilliance of late autumn cheer, which spreads a last hoorah with fiery blaze- then winter shares its sparkling, snowy glaze. What peace dwells in this purity of white that cloaks the hills and valleys day and night, while bare tree limbs, adorned with fluffy shawls, present their charming, visual delight. Quite joyful is that time when winter calls. And yet, while nature sleeps beneath this veil of white, the landscaped beauty is not firm. Devoid of color, mounds, and swirls of pale, white glow- sparked by the sun- does reaffirm its shiny brilliance is enjoyed short-term. And in that warmth, icicle gifts are cast like jeweled shards of crystal, holding fast on limbs and branches- clinging for a time, till the next storm- or spring awakes at last- to fully melt away old winter's clime. December 15, 2020 Contest: A Lovely Day Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley Form: Dizain- Rhyme Scheme: a b a b b c c d c d

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Date: 3/2/2022 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on your first-place poem <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)
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Date: 1/3/2021 9:14:00 AM
Terrific dizain Sandra. Happy new year and congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 1/3/2021 8:40:00 AM
Incredible imagery, Sandra. You tackled a form I find difficult and produced a work of fine art. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/3/2021 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 75 poems entered and yet your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placing, this was a very difficult contest to judge, but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 1/3/2021 7:59:00 AM
Beautiful Poem of Winter, dear Sandra. Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine
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Date: 12/15/2020 12:37:00 PM
Sandra, although I'm not a fan of winter, I thoroughly enjoyed your lovely poem. Here's to success in the Winter contest!
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