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Ephemeral Beauty

Our winter takes a stand to come each year:
beyond the spring, and after summer days,
accepts the brilliance of late autumn cheer,
which spreads a last hoorah with fiery blaze-
then winter shares its sparkling, snowy glaze.
What peace dwells in this purity of white
that cloaks the hills and valleys day and night,
while bare tree limbs, adorned with fluffy shawls,
present their charming, visual delight.
Quite joyful is that time when winter calls.

And yet, while nature sleeps beneath this veil
of white, the landscaped beauty is not firm.
Devoid of color, mounds, and swirls of pale,
white glow- sparked by the sun- does reaffirm
its shiny brilliance is enjoyed short-term.
And in that warmth, icicle gifts are cast
like jeweled shards of crystal, holding fast
on limbs and branches- clinging for a time,
till the next storm- or spring awakes at last-
to fully melt away old winter's clime.


December 15, 2020

Contest: A Lovely Day Poetry Contest
Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley 
Form: Dizain- Rhyme Scheme: a b a b b  c c d c d
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Legros Kelley Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 1:53 PM
Congratulations Sandra on your first-place poem <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)
Fowler Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Terrific dizain Sandra. Happy new year and congratulations on the win! Linda
Devonshire Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Incredible imagery, Sandra. You tackled a form I find difficult and produced a work of fine art. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations Sandra! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, this contest had 75 poems entered and yet your poem rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placing, this was a very difficult contest to judge, but your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
George   Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Beautiful Poem of Winter, dear Sandra. Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~ Elaine
Hankins Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 12:37 PM
Sandra, although I'm not a fan of winter, I thoroughly enjoyed your lovely poem. Here's to success in the Winter contest!
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