Eon: Part Iii

as to this date, no one individual, no
group of individuals & no nation of 
individuals has been responsible for the
elimination of all the species---books &
movies are spit out repeatedly concerning
those who have come close, but such 
a story is as random as a supposed “saint”
arising---such compassionate people that
inspire love & trust (things denied to so
many others) seem to roar atop the buildings &
mountains, echoing down the streets---
their stories are told in desperate hope
made by those humans enjoying the rewards,
so as to drown out those that reveal the very
essence of what it is to be on the neglected 
side of this history of “culture” & “progress.”

when the neglected consider causing
damage to everything, to everyone, to
all things animate & inanimate, to access
all the anger bred by constant pain 
bestowed on them & to focus that
rage in a deliberate manner towards the 
rest of the species who will continue to claim
until their dying day that the fault of all the 
wrongdoing to one is the responsibility of 
that same individual, 
then it is those that neglect, cause harm 
(without conscience), who reap the happy 
smiles on earth & who do not think about
the ramifications that it has on others who
will no doubt be the first to want to lock 
away any such people, to kill such people,
to anesthetize such people & stop such a
change in the scheme of things from 
happening---as it always has been---but
damage will not go away when it is 
addressed in such an unsavory manner,
rather, it will multiply, it will strengthen
from within & it will be ready when
the reapers of the earth are at their 
weakest, like a wild cat watching its 
prey, limping in the forest.

with a indiscriminate wrath more 
complete than anything imagined by 
the most horrific of “god” conjurers,
slashing, tearing, claws, throw the
whole big rock off its balance,
flushing away all remnants of a 
selfish & sick species whose time’s
long been calling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/6/2012 11:34:00 PM
Andrew, I just read all three of your Eon's and they read so fluidly I went looking for more, but I see there are none...yet...you have quite a gift with words my friend...they flow like silk and strong...very well written and stated...I have seen what you speak of...Well Done write...big hug, deb
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Date: 5/6/2012 11:44:00 PM
@DeborahBurch. Thanks so much for taking the time to read this piece! It is a long poem---only three parts : ) Glad you liked it! Thanks for the encouragement.
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