Envy of the Bermise Alps

Stalwart Alps beauty sees
Wild crocus blooms at your feet
White around your crown

Daffodils blowing in wind
Sun shines brightly once again

Glorious vibrant
Hues, reflect the rays, much joy
Eyes take and treasure

Daffodils shout a 
Welcome to spring, trumpeting
To Narcissus' song

Cool breeze blow against the blooms
Welcome colors fragrant joy.

Daffadown Dilly
Jonquil a Southern beauty
Amaryllis' gift

~~~For the Rengay competition sponsored by Deborah Guzzi~~~~~
~~~Co-written with Sara Kendrick~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/21/2010 3:23:00 AM
My congratulations to you Doris and Sara for your big win on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/19/2010 5:56:00 AM
Congrats to YOU on your big win!!! And thanks so much for your thoughtful congrats. All the best, shar
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Date: 3/19/2010 3:17:00 AM
Doris and Sara, This is a beautiful picture of spring. After viewing some of your pictures, I know exactly where these words came from...two peaceful hearts enjoying God's world...His natural gifts to mankind. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations Doris on a first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/18/2010 6:17:00 PM
Hooray for you and your mother, Doris!! Terrific collaboration! Good job!! Congratulations on your 1st place win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/18/2010 3:12:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win in The Twining contest.. a terrific collaboration .. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:21:00 PM
Awesome poem form Doris and Sara. Good luck in competition. Best wishes, Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/17/2010 1:36:00 PM
YOu guys did an amazing job!!! Good luck in the contest, Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:24:00 AM
Now it's really spring. Thank you Doris and Sara for this nice piece of poetry and thank you for your comments...Gert
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:48:00 AM
Doris hank you for your welcome comment today and observation..Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/15/2010 11:15:00 PM
Beautiful..lovely..Charma
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Date: 3/15/2010 4:22:00 PM
Good luck in the contest.. I just read this on Sara's list.. a great descriptive poem Doris ... enjoyed also..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/15/2010 1:00:00 PM
Great come back on this one...I will have to think on it a little while..Keep the creative pen flowing. Mom
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Date: 3/15/2010 6:54:00 AM
Lovely picture portrayed here Doris, thanks so much for your welcome support Daniel
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