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Envious Admiration

Yonder on the lake, quiet, unhurried, svelte swans drift, swishing in soft, slow motion. They preen in pairs and admire their own reflection there on the liquid mirror. Enchanted by their own grace and beauty, they mutually, mutely envy each other !

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Date: 9/26/2010 7:14:00 AM
Alliteration works here to enhance imagery beautifully. Nice job
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