Entwined Love

The point where we touch
is diminished only by
the point where we join.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Hahaha nice humor makes one smile, Renee
Kelly Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Hmm. Trying to see the humor in this one as well. 'Tis a love senryu - for my guy :) But thanks for reading it, Ram!
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