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Entwined

alone
in the woods
solace they found
within each others arms
creepers

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13th February 2016
Contest: Entwined
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Placed 3rd

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Cecilia Macfarlane

March 4, 2016 at 5:23 PM

Paul, this is terrific! Congrats on a awesome write and win! Hugs

Paul Callus

March 6, 2016 at 10:02 AM

Many thanks, Cecilia:) It is lovely having you visit today. Hope you are keeping well:) hugs ~ paul

Pandita Sietesantos

February 29, 2016 at 3:47 PM

Beautiful with a wonderful twist at the end - I love the surprise! It deserves a 7 for sure! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus

February 29, 2016 at 4:22 PM

Thank you for the lovely feedback, Pandita! Both comments and high rating are appreciated, my friend. Warm regards ~ Paul

Sandra Haight

February 24, 2016 at 3:43 PM

Nice imagery, Paul. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra

Paul Callus

February 28, 2016 at 4:56 AM

Many thanks, Sandra. Excuse the late reply. Have a nice day....paul

Poet Destroyer A

February 23, 2016 at 11:44 AM

Paul, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~

Paul Callus

February 28, 2016 at 4:46 AM

Thank you, Linda...I'm still playing catching up with backdated mail!! Have a lovely day:) hugs // paul

Susan Gentry

February 23, 2016 at 8:31 AM

I knew this was a winner! Congratulations!

Paul Callus

February 28, 2016 at 4:41 AM

Thank you for coming back with congrats, Susan; your judgment is usually correct:) ~ Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

February 23, 2016 at 12:36 AM

bery creative, paul... so much meaninf in few words... sweet congrats on your placement!..huggs

Paul Callus

February 28, 2016 at 4:39 AM

So glad that you like it, Nette:) Thank you! Have a nice day...hugs // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 22, 2016 at 10:08 PM

Congrats on great win with this superb verse Paul..

Paul Callus

February 28, 2016 at 4:33 AM

Thank you, Upma; your mother & child entry was also a worthy winner:) Regards // paul

Beautiful Scars

February 22, 2016 at 6:54 PM

Paul, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

Paul Callus

February 28, 2016 at 4:23 AM

Thank you Laura; pls excuse the late reply...caught up in endless unanswered mail!! Have a nice day!:) Regards // paul

Len Gasun

February 14, 2016 at 8:20 AM

A cute romantic poem with an ending surprise my dear friend, Paul. I enjoyed the read this evening. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings to you and Happy Valentines! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 9:21 AM

It is always a pleasure to receive your lovely comments, Leonora:) Thank you! I hope you too are enjoying a happy Valentine's Day! love & hugs // paul

Susan Gentry

February 14, 2016 at 1:08 AM

Oh this is very good! Clever! Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 8:48 AM

Thank you, Susan. Have a lovely day:) // Regards ... paul

Connie Marcum Wong

February 13, 2016 at 8:59 PM

Your title makes clear the meaning of your poem. This is uniquely brilliant Paul! #7

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 8:46 AM

Both lovely comments and the high rating are appreciated, Connie...thank you:) Have a pleasant day. ~ Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

February 13, 2016 at 7:17 PM

I loved this write...I know what creepers are...but the word gives me the creeps! ;) How are you, dear? Coming by to visit. Hugs

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 8:28 AM

So, I presume you're going for the dark romance, Eileen! It's lovely to have you back, though in the meantime I have kept you in my thoughts and observed from a distance:) hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A

February 13, 2016 at 6:06 PM

I like this very much, it is creepy. Alone, dark, woods, are not the on my date book tomorrow... JK... It's a wonderful write, kind of romantic to find that perfect moment. ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 7:30 AM

Thank you for the pleasant comments, Linda. I hope that with the arrival of Valentine's Day any anxiety there was has now been scattered far and wide:) hugs // paul

John Fleming

February 13, 2016 at 2:37 PM

I have to agree with Timothys comments regarding your poem, Paul. It is certainly very intriguing and open to interpretation. I also feel a sense of dark foreboding attached to the lines...Very skillfully done - A seven! My very best regards as always, Paul. :) john

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 7:07 AM

Both you and Timothy have given lovely positive feedback, John...thank you; great to have you back posting again! Hope you are keeping well. ~ All the best...paul

Elaine George

February 13, 2016 at 2:34 PM

Now...that is what I call...creative writing.

Paul Callus

February 14, 2016 at 7:05 AM

That is very nice of you, Elaine:) Thank you! ~ Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

February 13, 2016 at 10:47 AM

I think that last line is open to interpretation. Are the lovers in the woods the creepers, or are there creepers watching them, unbeknownst to them? Curious what you had in mind. Luck on the contest!

Paul Callus

February 13, 2016 at 5:27 PM

Take your pick, Timothy! Choose from personification, dark and eerie, plain romantic, and whatever your imagination dictates! The aim is to get the readers to explore different avenues and stretch their imaginative strings. A short write's success depends on all this, otherwise it will flounder at the word go! Thank you for your insightful feedback. Regards // paul

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