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alone
in the woods
solace they found
within each others arms
creepers

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13th February 2016
Contest: Entwined
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Placed 3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/4/2016 5:23:00 PM
Paul, this is terrific! Congrats on a awesome write and win! Hugs
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:02:00 AM
Many thanks, Cecilia:) It is lovely having you visit today. Hope you are keeping well:) hugs ~ paul
Date: 2/29/2016 3:47:00 PM
Beautiful with a wonderful twist at the end - I love the surprise! It deserves a 7 for sure! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 2/29/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Pandita! Both comments and high rating are appreciated, my friend. Warm regards ~ Paul
Date: 2/24/2016 3:43:00 PM
Nice imagery, Paul. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 2/28/2016 4:56:00 AM
Many thanks, Sandra. Excuse the late reply. Have a nice day....paul
Date: 2/23/2016 11:44:00 AM
Paul, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/28/2016 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, Linda...I'm still playing catching up with backdated mail!! Have a lovely day:) hugs // paul
Date: 2/23/2016 8:31:00 AM
I knew this was a winner! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/28/2016 4:41:00 AM
Thank you for coming back with congrats, Susan; your judgment is usually correct:) ~ Regards // paul
Date: 2/23/2016 12:36:00 AM
bery creative, paul... so much meaninf in few words... sweet congrats on your placement!..huggs
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Date: 2/28/2016 4:39:00 AM
So glad that you like it, Nette:) Thank you! Have a nice day...hugs // paul
Date: 2/22/2016 10:08:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb verse Paul..
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Date: 2/28/2016 4:33:00 AM
Thank you, Upma; your mother & child entry was also a worthy winner:) Regards // paul
Date: 2/22/2016 6:54:00 PM
Paul, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/28/2016 4:23:00 AM
Thank you Laura; pls excuse the late reply...caught up in endless unanswered mail!! Have a nice day!:) Regards // paul
Date: 2/15/2016 4:59:00 AM
Great write, Paul. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Teppo. I am not quite sure if this is what BW is after, but another poem has been born:) // Regards ... paul
Date: 2/14/2016 8:20:00 AM
A cute romantic poem with an ending surprise my dear friend, Paul. I enjoyed the read this evening. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings to you and Happy Valentines! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/14/2016 9:21:00 AM
It is always a pleasure to receive your lovely comments, Leonora:) Thank you! I hope you too are enjoying a happy Valentine's Day! love & hugs // paul
Date: 2/14/2016 1:08:00 AM
Oh this is very good! Clever! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/14/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. Have a lovely day:) // Regards ... paul
Date: 2/13/2016 8:59:00 PM
Your title makes clear the meaning of your poem. This is uniquely brilliant Paul! #7
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Date: 2/14/2016 8:46:00 AM
Both lovely comments and the high rating are appreciated, Connie...thank you:) Have a pleasant day. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 2/13/2016 7:17:00 PM
I loved this write...I know what creepers are...but the word gives me the creeps! ;) How are you, dear? Coming by to visit. Hugs
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Date: 2/14/2016 8:28:00 AM
So, I presume you're going for the dark romance, Eileen! It's lovely to have you back, though in the meantime I have kept you in my thoughts and observed from a distance:) hugs // paul
Date: 2/13/2016 6:06:00 PM
I like this very much, it is creepy. Alone, dark, woods, are not the on my date book tomorrow... JK... It's a wonderful write, kind of romantic to find that perfect moment. ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 2/14/2016 7:30:00 AM
Thank you for the pleasant comments, Linda. I hope that with the arrival of Valentine's Day any anxiety there was has now been scattered far and wide:) hugs // paul
Date: 2/13/2016 2:37:00 PM
I have to agree with Timothys comments regarding your poem, Paul. It is certainly very intriguing and open to interpretation. I also feel a sense of dark foreboding attached to the lines...Very skillfully done - A seven! My very best regards as always, Paul. :) john
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Date: 2/14/2016 7:07:00 AM
Both you and Timothy have given lovely positive feedback, John...thank you; great to have you back posting again! Hope you are keeping well. ~ All the best...paul
Date: 2/13/2016 2:34:00 PM
Now...that is what I call...creative writing.
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Date: 2/14/2016 7:05:00 AM
That is very nice of you, Elaine:) Thank you! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 2/13/2016 10:47:00 AM
I think that last line is open to interpretation. Are the lovers in the woods the creepers, or are there creepers watching them, unbeknownst to them? Curious what you had in mind. Luck on the contest!
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Date: 2/13/2016 5:27:00 PM
Take your pick, Timothy! Choose from personification, dark and eerie, plain romantic, and whatever your imagination dictates! The aim is to get the readers to explore different avenues and stretch their imaginative strings. A short write's success depends on all this, otherwise it will flounder at the word go! Thank you for your insightful feedback. Regards // paul