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Two trees have grown together by the sea, and danced by wind, forever they're entwined. Meant to be, they cling unwaveringly; two trees have grown together by the sea. Leaves sway and flutter in a rhapsody to ocean's roar; come to the shore and find two trees have grown together by the sea, and danced by wind, forever they're entwined. Written Feb. 11, 2016

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Sonia Walker

Date: 3/2/2018 9:20:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your first place spot. A lovely poem to read. Hugs, Sonia.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2018 8:33:00 PM

Awesome poem. You certainly did the form justice, Andrea. Congrats on your first place finish.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/28/2018 10:06:00 AM

Truly beautiful personification of the intertwined trees, accompanied by a wonderful illustration: Great recipe for your well-deserved first-prize trophy. Kudos! :) Gershon

John Lawless

Date: 2/28/2018 9:37:00 AM

OH NO....you twisted Triolet torturess....Congrats on the top spot Andrea. This form stalks the darkness of the muse within.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/28/2018 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea, well deserved win. Tom

Tom Arnone

Date: 4/23/2016 1:20:00 PM

Would like to sit under those loving, ocean trees -- learning about new poetry forms like the triolet! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/28/2016 4:55:00 AM

Triolets are a wonderful tool when used by able hands...this is one such example! Love your entwined trees:) Congratulations on yet another deserved win! Regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2016 11:42:00 AM

Andrea, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~

James Inman

Date: 2/23/2016 9:17:00 AM

Hi Andrea, just stopped by to re-read this beautiful poem.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/23/2016 8:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this Triolet! Excellent, as always! :) A 7

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/23/2016 4:08:00 AM

The picturesqueness and the refrain enthrall a reader. Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2016 12:29:00 AM

so nicely put together, andie... i think we have the same cisual.. big congrats with huggs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/22/2016 10:05:00 PM

Congrats on great win with this superb verse Andrea..

Lu Loo

Date: 2/22/2016 6:51:00 PM

Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

Jean Murray

Date: 2/22/2016 5:57:00 PM

This reminds me of home. I can see those two trees so clearly. Beautiful Andrea. Well done.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/20/2016 9:11:00 AM

Hi Andrea, a beautiful triolet, with such a wonderful vision at their core. So gentle the words that paint the canvas you place before us. Two trees entwined, maybe two spirits of Lovers who once stood there, spirit trees. Your words open up the floodgates of imagination. This wonderful write is deserving of a seven....Vlad.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/16/2016 12:26:00 AM

Oh this is good! And the pic is perfect! Good luck in the contest. Hugs....

Dah Dahlusion

Date: 2/14/2016 9:30:00 AM

Lovely, simply lovely! ––))

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/13/2016 11:52:00 AM

i love triolets, wrote a few way back when, just had to stop by and read this...beautiful imagery in this one, so cool how nature can twist trees together or make them all lean the same way... hugs

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/12/2016 9:34:00 PM

A very vivid image there, Andie. Triolet is indeed an effective form for a captivating imagery and you've done it excellently. All the best!

James Inman

Date: 2/12/2016 7:17:00 PM

Hi Andrea, lovely write. I've never tried this form. It sounds like something BW will really enjoy.

Jennifer Walker

Date: 2/12/2016 6:44:00 PM

Love the title and the picture is an added feature that your poem truly depicts.

Thomas Martin

Date: 2/12/2016 4:19:00 PM

Nicely penned! Excellent metaphors carry your poem, Angela!

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/12/2016 2:46:00 PM

Reminds me of the song "Barbara Allan" - an old English folk tune. It was about a red rose and a briar which intertwined on the two lovers graves. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/12/2016 2:14:00 PM

Very well penned with feeling and good use of metaphors that bring the essence of your feelings to the surface like so much drift wood scattered by the waves. Emile.