Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

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Entwined

Two trees have grown together by the sea,

and danced by wind, forever they're entwined.

Meant to be, they cling unwaveringly;

two trees have grown together by the sea.

Leaves sway and flutter in a rhapsody

to ocean's roar; come to the shore and find

two trees have grown together by the sea,

and danced by wind, forever they're entwined.


Written Feb. 11, 2016

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Sonia Walker March 2, 2018 at 9:20 PM Andrea, congratulations on your first place spot. A lovely poem to read. Hugs, Sonia.

Line Gauthier March 2, 2018 at 8:33 PM Awesome poem. You certainly did the form justice, Andrea. Congrats on your first place finish.

Gershon Wolf February 28, 2018 at 10:06 AM Truly beautiful personification of the intertwined trees, accompanied by a wonderful illustration: Great recipe for your well-deserved first-prize trophy. Kudos! :) Gershon

John Lawless February 28, 2018 at 9:37 AM OH NO....you twisted Triolet torturess....Congrats on the top spot Andrea. This form stalks the darkness of the muse within.

Tom Cunningham February 28, 2018 at 6:51 AM Congratulations Andrea, well deserved win. Tom

Tom Arnone April 23, 2016 at 1:20 PM Would like to sit under those loving, ocean trees -- learning about new poetry forms like the triolet! :-)

Paul Callus February 28, 2016 at 4:55 AM Triolets are a wonderful tool when used by able hands...this is one such example! Love your entwined trees:) Congratulations on yet another deserved win! Regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 11:42 AM Andrea, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~

James Inman February 23, 2016 at 9:17 AM Hi Andrea, just stopped by to re-read this beautiful poem.

Susan Gentry February 23, 2016 at 8:39 AM Congratulations on your win with this Triolet! Excellent, as always! :) A 7

Probir Gupta February 23, 2016 at 4:08 AM The picturesqueness and the refrain enthrall a reader. Congratulations.

Nette Onclaud February 23, 2016 at 12:29 AM so nicely put together, andie... i think we have the same cisual.. big congrats with huggs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 22, 2016 at 10:05 PM Congrats on great win with this superb verse Andrea..

Beautiful Scars February 22, 2016 at 6:51 PM Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*

Jean Murray February 22, 2016 at 5:57 PM This reminds me of home. I can see those two trees so clearly. Beautiful Andrea. Well done.

Vladislav Raven February 20, 2016 at 9:11 AM Hi Andrea, a beautiful triolet, with such a wonderful vision at their core. So gentle the words that paint the canvas you place before us. Two trees entwined, maybe two spirits of Lovers who once stood there, spirit trees. Your words open up the floodgates of imagination. This wonderful write is deserving of a seven....Vlad.

Susan Gentry February 16, 2016 at 12:26 AM Oh this is good! And the pic is perfect! Good luck in the contest. Hugs....

Dah Dahlusion February 14, 2016 at 9:30 AM Lovely, simply lovely! ––))

Sandra Adams February 13, 2016 at 11:52 AM i love triolets, wrote a few way back when, just had to stop by and read this...beautiful imagery in this one, so cool how nature can twist trees together or make them all lean the same way... hugs

Kp Nunez February 12, 2016 at 9:34 PM A very vivid image there, Andie. Triolet is indeed an effective form for a captivating imagery and you've done it excellently. All the best!

James Inman February 12, 2016 at 7:17 PM Hi Andrea, lovely write. I've never tried this form. It sounds like something BW will really enjoy.

Jennifer Walker February 12, 2016 at 6:44 PM Love the title and the picture is an added feature that your poem truly depicts.

Thomas Martin February 12, 2016 at 4:19 PM Nicely penned! Excellent metaphors carry your poem, Angela!

Matthew Anish February 12, 2016 at 2:46 PM Reminds me of the song "Barbara Allan" - an old English folk tune. It was about a red rose and a briar which intertwined on the two lovers graves. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Emile Pinet February 12, 2016 at 2:14 PM Very well penned with feeling and good use of metaphors that bring the essence of your feelings to the surface like so much drift wood scattered by the waves. Emile.

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