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Entwined

Two trees have grown together by the sea,

and danced by wind, forever they're entwined.

Meant to be, they cling unwaveringly;

two trees have grown together by the sea.

Leaves sway and flutter in a rhapsody

to ocean's roar; come to the shore and find

two trees have grown together by the sea,

and danced by wind, forever they're entwined.


Written Feb. 11, 2016

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2016

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Sonia Walker Date: 3/2/2018 9:20:00 PM Andrea, congratulations on your first place spot. A lovely poem to read. Hugs, Sonia. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 3/2/2018 8:33:00 PM Awesome poem. You certainly did the form justice, Andrea. Congrats on your first place finish. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 2/28/2018 10:06:00 AM Truly beautiful personification of the intertwined trees, accompanied by a wonderful illustration: Great recipe for your well-deserved first-prize trophy. Kudos! :) Gershon Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 2/28/2018 9:37:00 AM OH NO....you twisted Triolet torturess....Congrats on the top spot Andrea. This form stalks the darkness of the muse within. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/28/2018 6:51:00 AM Congratulations Andrea, well deserved win. Tom Login to Reply

Tom Arnone Date: 4/23/2016 1:20:00 PM Would like to sit under those loving, ocean trees -- learning about new poetry forms like the triolet! :-) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/28/2016 4:55:00 AM Triolets are a wonderful tool when used by able hands...this is one such example! Love your entwined trees:) Congratulations on yet another deserved win! Regards // paul Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/23/2016 11:42:00 AM Andrea, Congratulations on your Entwined win... XOX ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 2/23/2016 9:17:00 AM Hi Andrea, just stopped by to re-read this beautiful poem. Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 2/23/2016 8:39:00 AM Congratulations on your win with this Triolet! Excellent, as always! :) A 7 Login to Reply

Probir Gupta Date: 2/23/2016 4:08:00 AM The picturesqueness and the refrain enthrall a reader. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/23/2016 12:29:00 AM so nicely put together, andie... i think we have the same cisual.. big congrats with huggs! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/22/2016 10:05:00 PM Congrats on great win with this superb verse Andrea.. Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 2/22/2016 6:51:00 PM Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles* Login to Reply

Jean Murray Date: 2/22/2016 5:57:00 PM This reminds me of home. I can see those two trees so clearly. Beautiful Andrea. Well done. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 2/20/2016 9:11:00 AM Hi Andrea, a beautiful triolet, with such a wonderful vision at their core. So gentle the words that paint the canvas you place before us. Two trees entwined, maybe two spirits of Lovers who once stood there, spirit trees. Your words open up the floodgates of imagination. This wonderful write is deserving of a seven....Vlad. Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 2/16/2016 12:26:00 AM Oh this is good! And the pic is perfect! Good luck in the contest. Hugs.... Login to Reply

Dah Dahlusion Date: 2/14/2016 9:30:00 AM Lovely, simply lovely! ––)) Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 2/13/2016 11:52:00 AM i love triolets, wrote a few way back when, just had to stop by and read this...beautiful imagery in this one, so cool how nature can twist trees together or make them all lean the same way... hugs Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 2/12/2016 9:34:00 PM A very vivid image there, Andie. Triolet is indeed an effective form for a captivating imagery and you've done it excellently. All the best! Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 2/12/2016 7:17:00 PM Hi Andrea, lovely write. I've never tried this form. It sounds like something BW will really enjoy. Login to Reply

Jennifer Walker Date: 2/12/2016 6:44:00 PM Love the title and the picture is an added feature that your poem truly depicts. Login to Reply

Thomas Martin Date: 2/12/2016 4:19:00 PM Nicely penned! Excellent metaphors carry your poem, Angela! Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 2/12/2016 2:46:00 PM Reminds me of the song "Barbara Allan" - an old English folk tune. It was about a red rose and a briar which intertwined on the two lovers graves. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 2/12/2016 2:14:00 PM Very well penned with feeling and good use of metaphors that bring the essence of your feelings to the surface like so much drift wood scattered by the waves. Emile. Login to Reply

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